Evenfall

come; sit for 
 a bit on the
  bench in
   the gazebo; 
    before evenfall. 
     watch the sun 
      wan dim
       feel the flame
        burn lose,
         inviting 
          spirit love 
           to sing with passion,
            boring deep, bound on its 
             own 
              mist of evenfall.

2. Evenfall
 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3, 2, 3,3, 5, 6,1,5 
Poetry Contest: Pick-A-Title, Vol 17 - Yalto -'
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
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Pandit Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 7:35 AM
Congrats on your win Eve--a splendid write.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 8:34 PM
Congratulations! Love the poem and the way you typed it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 3:36 PM
Wow Eve! This is a stunning beauty! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
Watt Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 10:40 AM
Back to congratulate you for your win in Edward's contest, dear Eve.
Mcgee Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 9:53 AM
Eve, again you have a beautifully worded poem of passion. Congratulations on your win.
Mishra Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 8:07 AM
This is full of poignant passion and creativity. Congratulations on your win Eve :)
Ibeh Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 6:45 AM
Congratulations on the winning my contest with this fabulous Yalto, Eve:-) Congrats on winning Brian's contest as well!
Manassian Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 3:15 AM
Lovely imagery here, Eve. One feels a serenity within the lines. Blessings.
Proxenos Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 1:42 AM
I so enjoyed this write unusual but as usual with your truly creative and gifted flair. I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend, Keep save. Jennifer.
Watt Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 5:43 PM
Eve, beautiful imagery as dusk approaches. Best wishes in the yalto contest with this excellent write. Hugs ~ John
Watt Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 1:44 AM
Congratulations on winning top spot with Brian today!
Allison Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 2:46 AM
such beautiful romantic lines Eve, a delightful interpretation of the theme:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 8:22 PM
Love the words AND the lovely patterning, Eve. That last line, incredible.
Mcintosh Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 8:02 PM
A lovely poem that I so enjoyed. May God bless you richly dear friend. Love to you, Gina
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