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come; sit for a bit on the bench in the gazebo; before evenfall. watch the sun wan dim feel the flame burn lose, inviting spirit love to sing with passion, boring deep, bound on its own mist of evenfall. 2. Evenfall 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3, 2, 3,3, 5, 6,1,5 Poetry Contest: Pick-A-Title, Vol 17 - Yalto -' Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 5/22/2020 7:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win Eve--a splendid write.
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Date: 5/21/2020 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations! Love the poem and the way you typed it.
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Date: 5/20/2020 3:36:00 PM
Wow Eve! This is a stunning beauty! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/20/2020 10:40:00 AM
Back to congratulate you for your win in Edward's contest, dear Eve.
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Date: 5/20/2020 9:53:00 AM
Eve, again you have a beautifully worded poem of passion. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/20/2020 8:07:00 AM
This is full of poignant passion and creativity. Congratulations on your win Eve :)
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Date: 5/20/2020 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations on the winning my contest with this fabulous Yalto, Eve:-) Congrats on winning Brian's contest as well!
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Date: 5/19/2020 3:15:00 AM
Lovely imagery here, Eve. One feels a serenity within the lines. Blessings.
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Date: 5/19/2020 1:42:00 AM
I so enjoyed this write unusual but as usual with your truly creative and gifted flair. I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend, Keep save. Jennifer.
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Date: 5/18/2020 5:43:00 PM
Eve, beautiful imagery as dusk approaches. Best wishes in the yalto contest with this excellent write. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 5/19/2020 1:44:00 AM
Congratulations on winning top spot with Brian today!
Date: 5/18/2020 2:46:00 AM
such beautiful romantic lines Eve, a delightful interpretation of the theme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/17/2020 8:22:00 PM
Love the words AND the lovely patterning, Eve. That last line, incredible.
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Date: 5/17/2020 8:02:00 PM
A lovely poem that I so enjoyed. May God bless you richly dear friend. Love to you, Gina
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