Evenfall

Purple smile Of mauve evening Kisses Magenta sky, Arousing passions On hushed arc, Courting Evenfall. Sun dips In ocean, Ceding to Moon’s quixotic reign. Bird songs romanticize Night’s Rendezvous with stars. May 15, 2020 Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 17- Yalto- Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Lines 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 Placed 3rd: Brian's Choice N Contest

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/22/2020 2:10:00 AM

Vijay,congratulations on your romantic win. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/22/2020 7:31:00 AM

Thank you Eve--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/20/2020 3:21:00 PM

I knew this was headed for stardom Vijay! Congratulations on your wonderful first placement! Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2020 6:56:00 AM

So very kind of you Connie--much appreciate.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/20/2020 8:01:00 AM

Dropping by to congratulate you on your wonderful win Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2020 6:56:00 AM

Thank you Aditi--much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/20/2020 7:41:00 AM

Splash of colors and lines such as moon’s quixotic reign and all the romance you bring, Vijay! Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2020 6:55:00 AM

Wonderful to read your comments, Kim--much appreciate--many thanks.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/20/2020 6:24:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on winning first place in my contest, Vijay:-) What dazzling imagery in your beautiful poem!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2020 6:55:00 AM

So very kind of you Edward---thank you for taking the time to hold contests. Much appreciate.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/18/2020 11:35:00 AM

dazzling as stars and bright moon, vijay!...much enjoyed...huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2020 11:36:00 AM

Thank you Nette--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/18/2020 1:52:00 AM

Outstanding imagery in this beautiful Yalto Vijay! The night skies are filled with the romance of nature's sights and sounds! Ahhh! Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2020 9:40:00 AM

So very kind of you, Connie--much appreciate--many thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/16/2020 4:25:00 PM

You have tackled this form with an array of striking and colorful images, Vijay. As the night keeps its rendezvous with stars, so also you keep yours with poetic romanticism! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2020 11:37:00 AM

Much appreciate Paul--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/16/2020 7:12:00 AM

Vijay, this is beautiful. Love it. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 8:41:00 AM

So very kind of you Janice--much appreciate--many thanks.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/16/2020 3:15:00 AM

Wonderful imagery in this difficult form..Great entry Vijay..Good luck..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 8:40:00 AM

Much appreciate Jenish--many thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/15/2020 5:05:00 PM

your imagery is sublime Vijay I think this will place very well it is truly beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 8:39:00 AM

Thank you Jan--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 5/15/2020 2:00:00 PM

I'm glad you had a rendezvous with a yalto poem...quite lovely!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 8:39:00 AM

Much appreciate Jeanne--many thanks.

John Hamilton

Date: 5/15/2020 10:50:00 AM

Wonderful write Vijay, but that's what we've come to expect, beautiful phrasing, especially enjoyed moons quixotic reign!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 8:38:00 AM

Delighted by your visit John. Many thanks for the kind remarks--much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/15/2020 10:43:00 AM

The day ends ushering in even fall, love your discription of it Vijay, striking imagery. Good luck in the contest Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 8:37:00 AM

So very kind of you Tom. Much appreciate your comments--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/15/2020 10:02:00 AM

Now this is poetry, simply stunning, Vijay:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 8:37:00 AM

Delighted by your visit and cheerful feedback, Jo--many thanks.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/15/2020 9:53:00 AM

What a colourful, beautiful song of evenfall and the romanticism of sunset. This is really soothing. :) All the best!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Aditi--much appreciate.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 5/15/2020 8:20:00 AM

Vijay this is stunning, such vivid colours and imagery of that glorious Magenta sky. I am lucky to be able to see both the sunrise and sunset from my balconies and living up high it gives me a different painting each and every night! Good luck in the contest and I do hope you are keeping safe and well dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 8:35:00 AM

You are indeed blessed to have such wonderful hues everyday. Much appreciate your kind remarks Ann. Many thanks. Stay safe my friend.