Even You and I

Lost worlds are swirling in your eyes
Looking towards the heavens were you’ll roam.
Are you ready for it now? 
Are you waiting here just to go?
Well I will tell you little secrets 
And I will whisper all the lovely truths to you.
I will tell you of the many ways that you can feel free.
We can talk in circles and go around the world
All the while never leaving this desperate space of mine.
You told me you would be gone before the day began
But there you were and dressed to kill.
Shall we, dear? Shall we celebrate our fall?
I will dance you to the end of love 
I will dance you right up to that terrible sea.
Where the land meets the waters
And broken thoughts wash up on the shore.
Cut our throats on well-worn glass
And turn our eyes toward to the sky
For we will be going there some day.
I know we will dance there, even you and I.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 26, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Greta, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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August 21, 2015 at 10:03 PM
Greta, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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