Even the Wise and Peaceable Are Fools

My brother is young and says, 
“I’m wise for my years…”

My sister is younger and says, 
“I’m peaceful for my age…”

I am the eldest and say nothing…

They quarrel…
And quarrel…
And quarrel…

Then I said
	“Peace never lasts
		And the wise can be fools
You both made each other
	A tool to each other’s fool…”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 12:40 PM
Thats kids for you>>James
Joe Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 11:24 AM
Clara, wonderfully shaped. It has all the feelings of a proverb and that is what makes it work. The simple statement and the closure allow the reader to think and fill in their own meaning. Whilst you may have intended a particular meaning I think that you avoid preaching. A lovely poem that is worth revisiting.
Freeman Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 10:29 AM
Love's wisdom, Clara, Your poems are like a breath of heaven, from Love's Heir! Godly power love to you! Moses
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