Even Roses Do

Wind beaten, lashing Against such, beauty still shows Even Roses strive .

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/27/2015 5:07:00 AM

Wow, wow, wow, wow!!!!

James Fraser
Date: 3/29/2015 3:44:00 PM

Four little words that left me speechless on Friday, I can offer one Wow, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/25/2015 10:06:00 AM

Dino James, the roses stand not only as the flower rose its more.. :)! beauty still shows after lashes and beats as the roses stood again, tried and tried to live.. :) warm hugs//olive eloisa..xxx

James Fraser
Date: 3/25/2015 1:36:00 PM

So true Olive, it's beauty shines through no matter what's thrown at them. The same happens in life also..warm ((( hugs))) back at you always, Dino James xxx

Elaine George

Date: 3/25/2015 5:20:00 AM

Ah! Yes indeed, they do. The rose...such a creature and such a metaphor for us poets. Wonderful Haiku, James. and...thank you for your comment on my Bio. Your friend, Elaine

James Peranteau

Date: 3/23/2015 10:44:00 AM

There could be one petal left on a roses plumage after the wind storm....I'd still write of its beauty dear poet ! Great write James ! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~>

James Fraser
Date: 3/23/2015 2:07:00 PM

I couldn't agree more James. I so love writing about Roses, whether in nature of Dark Fantasy poems. There's just something about them, James :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2015 1:26:00 PM

beautifully penned yet deep and sad imagery James:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx No roses in my garden the winds here destroy the blooms

James Fraser
Date: 3/22/2015 7:23:00 AM

Afternoon Jan, I had Roses in the garden but baby conifers soon put them to bed as they grew to quick and the Roses passed :( Happy Sunday to you, hugs//James xx