Eve of Eternity

She couldn't contain her rhapsody demeanor much more
hugging her husband and gushing with excitement as he closed the door
the third class cabin was modest but she thought it would do
finally spending time together in this steerage cabin room

After dining together and playing cards with some other passengers
they retired to their cabin and did some reading till their eyes tired
then they spooned together in the darkness of the room
and made passionate love being they were on their honeymoon

Sound asleep till they we're abruptly awaken by a violent jarring
finding out from people running about it was from an icebergs scarring
throwing on their overcoats they we're thrown two lifejackets
and fought their way up to the top deck amidst all the panic

Their weary eyes saw the last lifeboat being lowered down to the ocean
many brave men staying behind waving trying not to show emotion
the newlyweds hugged each other while their faces wept
about to go down with the ship into the fathomless depths

They held hands while trying with all their might to hold on and grip
as the ship rose up perpendicular making them and others slip
the ship now offered nothing but quietus to the passengers on board
as they both plummeted in slow motion down to the ocean floor

Some survivors in the Titanic lifeboats watched with pitiful awe
while others who lost loved ones lost control and bawled
the ones who lost many possessions tried not to show too much enmity
while the newlyweds love story would last for all eternity.


3-18-18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/10/2018 10:42:00 PM
Dear Cheryl, I love the way you wrote your story, building it up very nonchalantly to this epic tale. It is very endearing and a FAVE for me. Thank you.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/10/2018 10:57:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind flattering comment and visit Line; glad you enjoyed the read and its a fave for you!~Che :)
Date: 4/3/2018 3:36:00 PM
Cheryl, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write, I enjoyed it a lot.
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Date: 4/3/2018 7:46:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Broken Wings; really appreciate placing me as one of the winners!~Che :)
Date: 4/1/2018 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Cheryl! Well done :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:21:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Heidi; really appreciate it!~Che :) Hope you had a good Easter/Resurrection Day! :)
Date: 3/19/2018 12:56:00 AM
Such a sad tale,and it could so easily have been me or you. Our book of life already written who knows what's in the fort coming chapters. Tom
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Date: 3/19/2018 8:31:00 AM
I can only imagine what they went through as the great ship slowly sank….Very true about the chapters in our book of life too! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom; appreciate it!~Che :)
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