Evanescent

White rain showered the walled garden; the bridal bouquet becomes a wreath

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Brian Anderson

Date: 4/17/2009 11:42:00 PM

amazing imagery, brian. i can SEE this poem. good stuff, my friend

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/17/2009 1:12:00 PM

Brian, this confuses me. Is there a loss involved? Sometimes I must admit I really do not feel very bright when interpreting. I know when you tell me I will feel like an idiot. Sorry. Imagery is lovely, but I do not know if it is for a sad reason or not. Love, Shar

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/17/2009 10:45:00 AM

depressing image here friend, but, excellent work!

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/17/2009 6:46:00 AM

This is softly sad....excellent images, but can feel the darkness of the day. So well written!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/17/2009 3:57:00 AM

Wow...the bridal bouquet becomes a wreath...powerful stuff..from joy to sorrow..wow.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/17/2009 1:44:00 AM

Nice imagery and great work...Raul