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Evading the Horrors of the Holocaust

hidden not to elicit a trifle response spiteful mordacious shackled on a horde race cartridge loiter about the ground wizened with years 4/3/2017

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Date: 4/6/2017 1:39:00 PM
This is my kind of poem, Eve. Love trying to read between the lines and letters. I believe John will appreciate this, I know I certainly do. Without purporting to have properly interpreted your poem, I'll say the final two lines provided me with the image of a cemetery accumulating the decaying artifacts of our "wisdom". Beautifully penned
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Date: 4/4/2017 9:05:00 PM
Hi Eve, You did well with the chosen words. If it's for a contest, it looks like a winner to me:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/4/2017 9:01:00 PM
Interesting write :) -Love Ettie
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Date: 4/4/2017 3:34:00 AM
Excellent. Very well expressed poem. Good luck.
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Date: 4/3/2017 7:07:00 AM
very well said and great use of the contest words. Good luck my friend.
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Date: 4/3/2017 6:53:00 AM
Very significant ... very well expressed ... Good Luck ...
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