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Evacuation

Total estimated casualties, including civilians and Taliban 171,000 to 174,000 all in the cause of a very dubious war, returning Afghanistan to what it was 20 years before, and abandoning some of those  who helped and are now likely to be hunted down and executed.
This doesn’t include the injured, physically and mentally.
Is there any cause for any Politician to have any pride in this.

My dangerous journey starts, 
No time to dawdle or tarry,
Just a few belongings, reduced
To what I can easily carry.
My life rolled up in a backpack
Slung from one shoulder, 
My departure documents tightly
Clasped in a plastic folder.
Walking slowly up this gangway 
Into the bowels of this plane
Twenty years of change and hope
After the Taliban’s harsh reign.
Goodbye sere mountainous land
Harsh, severe, it used to be mine,
It’s all behind me now as I sit 
Lucky to be on this evacuation line.
Most of my life under occupation,
I can barely remember the Taliban,
A child when they left so I grew
Up in a very different Afghanistan.

A harsh and hasty decision made
Causing many to hesitate and grieve
Before taking the only real decision,
It’s time to pack up and leave.
A life of uncertainty in a new place
Heavens knows where it will be
Only one thing certainly known
We’ll have the status of refugee.
There’s a sense of fear and betrayal 
As your  occupation finally ends,
The clock starts to turn back as
Our New Dark Age truly descends.  .
You have much to answer for
After such a long stay
Just to suddenly decide
To up and walk away.
As you retreat once again
Do you really expect
The rest of the world
To still treat you with respect.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 12/12/2022 8:17:00 AM
Your poem gave me shivers Terry, and yes the world forgets quickly what doesn't happen at their own door. Unfortunately evacuation doesn't always mean salvation to a much better life. Refugees that come to Australia, can be in "prison" camps for years before their status is reviewed an they can join the rest of the population, and still we forget. Thanks for your enlightening poem.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 12/12/2022 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Wen. The real problem is those helpers they casually left behind, interpreters etc, who stand a great chance of painful deaths. We have a bad record of devastating countries, them just pulling out

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