Euphoric Daydream:

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I find myself sitting with a tree top view, Watching as the world slowly passes me by, This sacred place has been occupied by few, As the sounds of nature echo in the crystal sky. Cleansed in clear blue water my soul set free, Surrounded by phantasmagorical colourful fish, I wish the world could sit with me and see, But futile my quest it shall remain a wish. As the crimson sun searches for horizons low, And my eyes begin to wander heaven bound, In the knowledge that soon the first star will show, Through nature's sounds, my heart has been found. Could this be simply a euphoric daydream? Some kind of weird psychosis for all I know, Just then I am touched by the first moonbeam, And suddenly my eyes are captured in its glow. 9~May~2017 For Mountaintop Lake - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri.

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/20/2017 4:44:00 PM

Great write,,,,, In Druidry, the Blackbird is the keeper of the gateway! I shall have to remember that :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/9/2017 7:29:00 PM

Beautiful poem, White Wolf! Janice

White Wolf
Date: 5/9/2017 9:37:00 PM

Thank you very much, Janice /|\

Chris Green

Date: 5/9/2017 7:12:00 AM

Perfect my friend, this is a wonderful entry in the contest. I looked at it yesterday but it seemed quite daunting for me, but you did an amazing job with the phrases supplied. Best of luck Rick.

White Wolf
Date: 5/9/2017 7:17:00 AM

I'm certain you could conjure up something if time permits! The colourful fish threw me a bit! Haha, thank you, my friend! /|\

Probir Gupta

Date: 5/9/2017 6:32:00 AM

Nicely done poetic treatment of the theme ... Lovely ... Looks a winner ...

White Wolf
Date: 5/9/2017 6:40:00 AM

Thank you very much, Probir /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/9/2017 5:53:00 AM

A phantasmagorical euphoric idea synthesizing psychology and philosophy that brings a panoramic and dramatic apotheosis of poetry! A 7! You see my friend, WW that you speak Greek! haha! All words used here are Greek!

White Wolf
Date: 5/9/2017 5:59:00 AM

Where would we be without the Greeks? Still in the Stone Age! Haha! Funny but true! Thank you my dear friend /|\

Darren White

Date: 5/9/2017 12:19:00 AM

Phantasmagorical is a real fun word, isn't it? I love smithereens and myriads, and use it a lot :) Great poem, Budgie, good luck in the contest.

White Wolf
Date: 5/9/2017 12:23:00 AM

Haha, I also like unfathomable, because I can't fathom most things! Haha! Thanks, my friend! /|\