Eucalyptus Longing

The rushing wonts of action render these happenings unmovable,
These feelings, passionately felt, to dull words ill and strained
She clings, my koala, with chocolate eyes pining for my green
Though each time she lets me go, she leaves me docile and pained 

Once before I claimed her; yes, she did not turn away from me
But instead gazed on how the breeze could sway my branches
I wanted my bark to secrete the sweetest tears,
So she would know how eternally I yearn for her glances

For it is she alone, who can consume and digest my poisons
It is she alone—besides the sun—who gives me reason to stand erect

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/17/2016 12:17:00 AM
I never would have envisioned such a romantic bond between eucalyptus and a koala. Such an intriguing metaphor. "So she would know how eternally I yearn for her glances" << I'm mesmerized by the connections you paint ... the eucalyptus tree that longs to be loved, but only one creature can do so. A very beautiful poem for such an unusual concept.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/19/2016 3:17:00 AM
Thank you Timothy, for the thoughtful feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed reading. ~Laura
Date: 1/14/2016 6:45:00 AM
If only trees could really talk, What would we learn? Really nice read.
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Date: 12/30/2015 10:59:00 PM
Romeo and Juliette...except this has a much happier ending. Still you have to believe vegetation and mammals have to be forbidden love. This is another fav for me. Thank you for a marvellous read.
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Date: 12/19/2015 6:30:00 AM
A biologist, a mathematician (fractals), no--a poet!!! You make even the trees seem sweet. We have a beautiful planet and such a diversity of life. Not so many people are aware of it in this semi-blind modern society.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/21/2015 9:42:00 PM
: ) Yes we do, dear. Thanks for the sweetest comment. ~Laura
Date: 12/17/2015 3:30:00 PM
everything has a purpose....only the thing can choose how to serve this....my Purpose Is To Serve God And His Son....while ensuring that certain ladies have the goodest fun....by the way I like trees too....lol....;)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/18/2015 2:23:00 PM
Hey you! ^___^ Good to see you here enjoying the enchanting tree experience. ~Laura
Date: 12/17/2015 8:18:00 AM
If Justin, "The Prince of Passion" speaks so highly of this piece, you know you have a winner! Bravo.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/18/2015 2:21:00 PM
Justin's poetry just pulls you in.. I am greatly honored by his visits, and yours as well. Thanks for reading Richard! Always, Laura
Date: 12/16/2015 12:51:00 PM
WOW! WOW!!! This is the most beautiful poem of nature erotica I have ever felt, envisioned and read Laura, a love and pining so deep to the heart and soul. This is a masterpiece of natural desire and metaphor. "I wanted my bark to secrete the sweetest tears..." J.A.B. A FAV!!!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/16/2015 2:06:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed this one, Justin. <3 ~Laura
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