Ethereal Times

It was just a rope tied to a limb with a board, as a swing
we ran for position often, our challenge
pushing, racing, such a simple thing,

then

as momma told us both, "You best shoo."
even almost kind of pushed us out
"I'll call when my chores are through"

then

of course along the way were distractions
you know the kind, flowers and butterfly's
and we screamed joyfully in our reactions

then

In the feel of it all we never thought of restrictions
free to do anything, how silly it seems 
in what we didn't know as derelictions

then

when as young adults we went again
as if to enjoy, recapture those things
the swing had fallen away from the then

becoming part of the now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 7:39 AM
U build it up so nicely in fine brill rhymin poetess. Witty style poem. Pls review my latest poem too.
Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 5:30 AM
enjoyed the write, Dallas
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