Ethereal Openness

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Written: January 30, 2024
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Amidst the darkness,
a tunic of silence looms high
mentioned in a muttered manner
spying via disguised apertures
rooting remorse-ridden radiance
Upon a glimmering
A blue-toned backdrop
under a celestial canopy
with mesmerizing shimmer
A stillness wraps the earth
entangled in unfathomable peace.
An opus devoted to stillness
saturates this space
winter wonderland
breathing beauty blue
anodyne snowy utopia.

Winter dreary nights
prolonged and chilly,
glows with a suave weave
mesmerizing gray foliage
The exquisite grace
unparalleled in magnitude,
with bright sunrays bouncing off,
a pure, lovely layer of snow
Embrace a serene moment
where harmony rules supreme,
an enormous sensation of delight
as the euphoria wears off
The light was shimmering
In an icy realm devoid of any conflict,
But the bitter northern winter
Winds are as sharp as knives.

 
Suddenly, that time ended
As it slowly slips away,
A gift of blissfulness
remains in an unspoken way
akin to an infant sleeping
with calmness all around,
A place where time stood still
and tranquility was found
Sunlight and shadows
disappear, for it is meant to be,
In the seasons, finding hope
and the spirit soars free.

We're both ugly and gorgeous
We can love, but we may also hate
We breached the rules while playing
I wonder what our fate will be
Multifaceted, we love and detest
elegance and vulgarity
Healing our emotions requires action
and understand our ability to shift,
Support me in spreading love and peace
Inspire beauty in whatever we do,
We can accomplish this together
But the future is unknowable,
A single idea could alter the world,
I hope it's an idea that you have
A remedy for shattered emotions,
Another view I've been having
I believe there is promise,
Most people grasp the basics
Even my silly pride may leave a mark
I might be known for it in the future
Reminding others of the concept
I could also join them
Who is initiating this act?
Be involved in the entity
Simply by accepting love
When we realize we need peace,
That alone may be sufficient
We recall several eponyms,
One thing must be remembered,
This beauty is our goal.
Over ugly, we must convey beauty.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 2/1/2024 8:18:00 AM
Yes, beauty in all things be it actions, speech, thoughts or life in general is recommended. I enjoyed reading the ideas penned. Your visit to my page added a special touch. Sara K
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Date: 1/31/2024 6:00:00 AM
--A blue-toned backdrop under a celestial canopy with mesmerizing shimmer--A place where time stood still and tranquility was found Sunlight and shadows disappear, for it is meant to be, In the seasons, finding hope and the spirit soars free--fabulous writing my friend. Your descriptions are simply mesmerizing, Lasaad.
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Date: 1/31/2024 1:37:00 AM
Dear Sotto, this is a brilliant write really. I love the flow of words and how youv expressed here in a very wise manner as always. Depicting hope and desire to spread love and kindness. If only this world would be full of individuals that embrace kindness and are willing to give and spread light like how youv shared here, this world will be such a peaceful place. And you are right future is unknown. And as always theres a philosophical touch in your word weaving! Pleasure reading this. Soulful
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Date: 1/30/2024 12:56:00 PM
An ode to all the seasons and is accompanied by magnificent imagery, metaphors and alliteration. A real beauty.
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Date: 1/30/2024 11:21:00 AM
Hey Sotto.. I love how your poem is a journey through various landscapes and emotions, offering glimpses of tranquillity, beauty, and introspection and how it concludes with a call to action, urging readers to embrace love, spread peace, and strive for beauty amidst life's uncertainties. The notion of collective responsibility towards nurturing beauty and harmony resonates as a hopeful reminder of the transformative power of human connection and compassion..
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Date: 1/30/2024 10:59:00 AM
Beauty vs Ugly a concept you've woven so well. We are both! "In the seasons, finding hope and the spirit soars free" I like that line. If only we can together --"Embrace a serene moment where harmony rules supreme" "Healing our emotions requires action and understand our ability to shift" I enjoyed it's flow and the unique goal, inspiring! SP--easy to understand.
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