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March 29, 2024
Placed 2nd: Ethereal Lanterns Poetry Contest by Ink Empress


 

Ethereal Lanterns

As the holy season commemorates revelations of scriptures,
Sacred flame burning within, reinvigorates soul’s intellect,
Steering away from the fallible, toward realms of perfect,
Away from servitude of wealth, to caring for less-fortunate;

Empowering wisdom, vying sapience of enlightenment,
Inspiring collaboration in sanctity of spiritual exchange,
Rejecting overtures nescient, engaged in narrowness, 
That confine humanity in fallacies unwitting, misguided.

In domains of self-reflection, repentance, and forgiveness,
Voice of indifference cedes to psalms compassionate,
As defective acts vow to mend ways, yearning for flawless;
Remorseful and empathetic, eying benevolence of solace.

From teachings of awakening, from sagacity of harmony,
Cognitive minds seek insights, transcendent in epiphany,
Propelling life toward enrichment in peace and congruity,
Vying spheres beyond the ordinary, edified in tranquility.  

From sanctum of souls, depths of hearts, bells-pious chime,
Tolling expressions of kindness, echoing prayers sublime,
Celebrating precious gift of life, grateful for glory of divine,
As lanterns ethereal guide humanity, through reign of time.
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George Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:40 AM
Big congratulations to you dear
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 2:57 AM
Dear vijay, youv really captured what spirituality means and what holy days are in such a profound manner. Compassion kindness, charitable deeds and empathy, almost all the elements youv highlighted here and I absolutely love that about this poem, and the way your words hit so strongly is impeccable and powerful! I especially loved the line “ In domains of self-reflection, repentance, and forgiveness, Voice of indifference cedes to psalms compassionate” excellent! Pleasure reading this, congratulations
Baker Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 4:38 PM
It was a reverent experience just read your poem in solitude, Vijay. Time appropriate for the season and espousing an openness to Love. A FAV for my list! A fine entry for the contest, my friend. Good luck! Bill
Buhagiar Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 11:21 PM
Edified in tranquillity is a perfect description of your emotive Easter poem. Truly sublime.
Beaufort Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 4:01 PM
Vijay, this is a wonderful code of ethics. All the good things we'd like to see for humanity and society. We'd like to think that religious holidays will inspire our species to renew an effort to live in accordance with this code. I really like what you did with this one!
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Thanks for sharing this one about your faith. I hope this is the best Easter weekend for you and your family. Your visit to my page with congratulations was uplifting. Sara K
DiMino Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 5:06 AM
From sanctum of souls, depths of hearts, "bells-pious chime, Tolling expressions of kindness, echoing prayers sublime, Celebrating precious gift of life, grateful for glory of divine, As lanterns ethereal guide humanity, through reign of time." Beautiful writing! Sacred Truth personified. Blessings my friend, wishing you and yours a wonderful Easter! A FAV!
Buehler Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 7:53 PM
A beautifully worded, sublime poem, in the spirit of the season. This is a fave. Best wishes.
Nicholsen Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 5:37 PM
Awesome write many blessings Have a blessed Easter Season.
Poet Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 4:04 PM
The tremendous effect that the holy moment has on the spirit is well captured in this outstanding poem, Vijay, which is a great representation of the season. The idea that one might have an inner flame that can lead to enlightenment and assist one in resisting temptations from the outside world is extraordinarily motivating.
Rose  Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 3:28 PM
May that bright lantern guide you Vijay, through Easter time and all year round, with your heart always alight and beautiful. Your a great poet !
Nicole Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 3:20 PM
We must continue to keep our minds focused on the truth. Celebrating the precious gift of life, each and every day. I agree with your comment, Tom. Many wonderful blessings to you, Vijay. :) Hugs, Brandy
Nicole Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 4:50 PM
:) My heart is smiling.
Narain Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Nice poem relecting the essence of holy Easter season. Nice imagery and very thoghtful.
One Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 6:05 AM
This poem beautifully captures the essence of the holy season and the transformative power it holds for the soul. The imagery of the sacred flame igniting within, guiding towards realms of perfection and away from the trappings of material wealth, resonates deeply.
Cunningham Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 10:57 PM
You captured the holy season of Easter so well Vijay, every stanza a literary gem. Wishing you a very happy Easter weekend. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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