Ethereal lanterns

The spring of healing has its own anthem, 
It takes the sand and the sun to mold an ornament of time, 
Glaring upon the moving mirror that floats on cold water, 
Blinded by a blaze set by the sins that made silent quivers run through the chambers of this once upon a time frozen heart, 
Lightnings that run through the roof of these forsaken memories, 
What is it about pain that makes evils seem soothe,
That makes wicked wounds under broken bruises, 
No one mentioned how mending too can be mutilating, 
How the unforgiving frosts crack and pierce through the lungs, 
How igniting the sky full of light takes a sigh of ethereal lanterns, 
Yet they come with a handful of sorrows and compassion,
Drawn from a dream to wish upon the moon that sparkles for a night of bliss, 
Let us be amongst the hope once again, 
alone as a whole, 
The glistening gold in autumn, 
The deepest line in kohl,  
Forever we can be the ocean that flow, 
Without a prey nor predator, 
Just the living and the specs of salt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations dear lioness on your win.
Onpaper Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 10:05 AM
Thank u <3
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 3:44 AM
Ah papi, just love the way you weave metaphors and express in such a soulful manner as always, the way you paint imagery and how artistic you are even with your poetry is what makes me go wow! Those opening lines really drew me in and left me captivated, in awe! And i love the way youv also written “ Let us be amongst the hope once again, alone as a whole, The glistening gold in autumn, The deepest line in kohl, Forever we can be the ocean that flow, Without a prey nor predator” wow! So powerful! I am loving it, i just wish you would pay more attention to punctuation papi! I know you are lazy haha .but work on that and your poetry will flourish, as always! I love it anyhow! Congratulations
Onpaper Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 4:08 AM
Awwwn papii… thank u for choosing my piece … hahahah yesss I be lazy to fix la.. Ramadan made my brain cells toooooooo chill hahahah .. um sooo happy u enjoyed my piece aeee .. <3
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 5:07 AM
We are the small that imagines ourselves big. Even our planet in the scheme of things is smaller than a speck. But isn’t it amazing that we can contemplate the existence of everything? Perhaps the enormity of that contemplation makes us significant. A pleasure to surf your thoughts this morning.
Onpaper Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 4:06 AM
Awwn .. your perspective on this is very thought provoking..indeed it does .. in a pool of stars.. the tiniest little flicker of a star itself is our galaxy…
Rodgers Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 8:54 AM
Dear Lioness, What a great reflection on the complexities of healing and the duality of pain and peace. I loved the imagery you employ, from the spring of healing to the unforgiving frosts, evokes a profound sense of introspection and empathy. I also liked your exploration of the intertwining of sorrow and compassion showing us the delicate balance of emotions in the human experience. Lioness, your beautiful words, and insights with such depth and sensitivity and engaging. - Blessings, Daniel
Onpaper Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 4:01 AM
Thank you Daniel.. I am glad you enjoyed this piece
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