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Ethereal Epiphany

When rainstorm shadows cast raven woven blankets, entangling between the boundaries of fantasy and reality's reach, we search for soft glows from serenades of slumber, where we embrace the quilt of night. In restless dreams a dandelion soul yearns to reside within the realms of conscious thought. Traversing towards an enchanting valley where fields of lilacs and bluebells surround, laying foundations for rows of charismatic cherry blossoms, peacefully resting among a myriad of kaleidoscopic roses. Above, azure horizons reveal the naked sun, whose radiance shimmers upon sapphire waters, delicately blowing a refreshing breeze. Lucid choral images illuminate the mind, with visions of an ethereal epiphany - too difficult to define. Her heavenly muse echoes a majestic lullaby, beckoning hallelujah hearts to oblige in beats of unexplainable expressions, so suppressed thoughts bleed in turquoise waterfalls. Barren lands soak in reflection, as distance decreases. Eyes admire in a silent reverie. Enticing two isolated soulful minds to chant in a chorus of hummingbird hymns. An abundance of amorphous aromas enchant and enrapture, as senses blaze into passionate provinces of aurora aspirations. A ruby renaissance of rhapsodic romantic musings reverberate string less symphonies into the once, charcoal chambers of a redeemed, fluorescent lyrical couplet core. In ivory harmonies, venturing upon a pearled path not known to lovers before, beloveds search for a secret garden - home to Michelangelo's cathedral of paradise, yearning to savour its celestial artistic ambience, but upon the zenith of enticement, unwelcome Lilith skies slyly and silently encroach. Heaven recalls her halo shaped silhouette, as petals agitated by spiteful winds fall into murky waters. Feathers remain, floating helplessly in puddles of regret. Smoke clears, as clarity reveals white concrete walls with broken blinds. Nature's beams breathe a deep sigh. How sad, time does not care for our dreams.

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Date: 1/18/2024 3:04:00 PM
A mantra? A meditation? An empathetic journey into an utterly bliss filled world...YES!!! A lovely read. Health and Happiness Lonna
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Date: 1/7/2024 7:08:00 PM
These are lovely scenes. You are a Master of tying in the bless of creature upon the stage of a victory of love. Even if in dream, the utterance, alone is but not alone, in flutters hummingbirds (primaddonnas, ;-) lol) victory.
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Date: 1/7/2024 12:40:00 PM
Beautiful poem and well written all I can say is wow. love phyl
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Date: 1/6/2024 9:15:00 AM
....and a resounding FAVE. ~
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Date: 1/6/2024 9:13:00 AM
A huge Congratulations with this breathtaking literary jewel, Silent One. Your mind and pen flows in such great harmony. All the best ~
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Date: 1/6/2024 7:19:00 AM
S.O., CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive piece~~alive with expressive figures of speech and well-placed alliteration, very creative. Janice
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Date: 1/6/2024 6:08:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-earned contest placement dear SO.
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Date: 1/5/2024 6:41:00 PM
I admire silently your talent, S, :)
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Date: 1/5/2024 2:25:00 PM
your poem was captivating, Silent One. Your alliterations and rhymes continue to impress me as does your poetic artistic skills. Your poem was deep and spoke to my soul. This line was one of my favorites: How sad, time does not care for our dreams. Such a soulful write. Have a splendid weekend, Sara
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Date: 1/5/2024 1:06:00 PM
Superbly written! This takes the reader far away. Beautiful lines :)
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Date: 1/5/2024 12:52:00 PM
"Nature's beams breathe a deep sigh. How sad, time does not care for our dreams." -- Lovely writing, Si. Time is just a thoughtless counter. Means nothing till we give its integers our living voice. With our poetic inflections, then Time has changed dimension and direction. Forward or back or the same is Historical Truth. May we speak and move wisely.
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Date: 1/5/2024 9:38:00 AM
Dear Silent One, Such exquisite jewels of language adorn your artistic creation, permeating it with a refined elegance. The harmonious blend of words and the profound intricacy with which you have crafted them demonstrate an exceptional level of artistry. Numerous lines have captivated my attention, particularly appreciating your flawless use of alliteration and the vivid imagery you have skillfully painted. This evocative piece has left a profound impact on the heart. Added to my Fave.
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Date: 1/5/2024 8:31:00 AM
One of your best, my friend. Splendid gems of vocabulary paint your canvas throughout--In restless dreams a dandelion soul yearns to reside within the realms of conscious thought--Lucid choral images illuminate the mind, with visions of an ethereal epiphany -too difficult to define--and many more. WOW! A FAVE!!
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Date: 1/5/2024 6:41:00 AM
Wow where do i start praising this brilliant poem, I absolutely love the flow and depth and how you’ve woven words together in such an artistic manner. Theres so many lines that stood out for me especially, love your seamless alliterations and how you’ve painted imagery. Deeply moving and soul stirring. “ Her heavenly muse echoes a majestic lullaby, beckoning hallelujah hearts to oblige in beats of unexplainable expressions,“ this resonates with me so deeply right now. And its so ethereal-
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Date: 1/5/2024 6:45:00 AM
How you’ve written that. Goes so well with the theme of the poem too, “ but upon the zenith of enticement, unwelcome Lilith skies slyly and silently encroach.“ wow! Lilith skies and zenith of enticement truly stood out for me! “ Heaven recalls her halo shaped silhouette, as petals agitated by spiteful winds fall into murky waters.“ this resonates too with me on so many strong levels!” a secret garden - home to Michelangelo's cathedral of paradise,“ wow!!! This is just magical! Your use of colors metaphors and also flowers and diction here is truly impeccable! A fave this is for me! Loveee it

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