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Ethelinda

She said, you have not been bit until a dragon does it... Come my Ethelinda, lips to lips mouth to mouth you the speaker of the shroud with secrets of the dead.. Storms cannot remove you from my mind I'm incapable of not loving you from mist to snow to flickering starlight... I have searched the depths and fires of hell to feel you against my burning flesh invading every cell of my body... I have been waiting for you to fly into my life and satisfy my dreams to make of me the richest lord with your vast treasures... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

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Date: 1/23/2015 9:53:00 AM
sensual truly passionate liked these lines"I have searched the depths and fires of hell to feel you against my burning flesh invading every cell of my body..."..love to this noble serpent> God bless Ken for this fantasy
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Date: 4/20/2014 12:00:00 AM
Passionate yes, but also very creative!!!! Loved this on!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/20/2014 12:33:00 AM
Thank you Arthur!
Date: 4/19/2014 9:33:00 PM
wowowow, passion is RIGHT. (reading what Sandra said). Sure do enjoy your poetry, Ken.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/19/2014 9:47:00 PM
Thanks for the kind comment Andrea!
Date: 4/19/2014 9:24:00 PM
there is much passion behind your words....very well crafted poem Ken :) hugs
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/19/2014 9:32:00 PM
Thank you Sandra..Good to read from you!
Date: 4/19/2014 8:12:00 PM
excellently penned dear friend happy easter love and light
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/19/2014 8:37:00 PM
Happy Easter Liam!
Date: 4/19/2014 7:45:00 PM
Outstanding entreaty, dignified and deeply physical Ken. " Storms cannot remove you...invading every cell of my body..." exquisite metaphors. Satisfaction can lead to destruction in amazing ways though, take it anyhow. J.A.B.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/19/2014 7:53:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Justin!
Date: 4/19/2014 5:54:00 PM
A fancifully descriptive fantasy write.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/19/2014 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Robert!
Date: 4/19/2014 5:42:00 PM
enjoyed the passionate leel of this work, ken!,, hugggs
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/19/2014 5:47:00 PM
Thank you Nette!
Date: 4/19/2014 5:23:00 PM
Mystical and passionate, a potent combination!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/19/2014 5:47:00 PM
Much appreciated Richard!
Date: 4/19/2014 5:07:00 PM
Passionate lines for the lovely lady..I am sure the recipient of the love poem will be delighted..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/19/2014 5:46:00 PM
Thank you Sara!

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