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Eternity's Moment

Intricate webs of geometrical lines, Invisible cord between soul and mind, Stretched rigid and wearily taut. Time...searches cloistered designs Of snowflake precision...seeking to find Eternity...God's moment of thought. Astronomical fingers reach to infinity, Plunging through layers of time and dust, From Genesis to Revelation, birth to tomb... Revealing the reality of Divinity, Or Time's deception tainted by rust, Relativity. the fruit of the womb. Time stands before us...torn pages Painfully constructed...a microscope Hovering over the Creation of Earth and sky. A play on a universe of stages Passes fleetingly through Man's hope. Knowledge...born of the animal cry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/7/2012 4:37:00 PM
‡ Owww & I Love Your Lovely Name By The, 'Patricia * Tis Sooo Beautiful.' * My Luv, Rae Rae ‡
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Date: 7/7/2012 4:34:00 PM
‡ As HE Raised Eyes Unto Heaven As HIS Spirit Rejoiced, Saying, FATHER, Thank YOU For Revealing This Wisdom Of Light & Life Unto Small Babes... * Smile, This Is An Amazing Poem Albeit A Bit Laced Amid The Gray Glooms Way * Borne, Of A Babies Cry * My Luv, Rachel ‡
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Date: 6/19/2009 4:01:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comments. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/15/2009 8:04:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke
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Date: 6/15/2009 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations Patricia on "Eternity's Moment" being featured. Vince
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Date: 6/15/2009 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Patricia. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2009 10:03:00 PM
Patricia - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/8/2009 6:09:00 PM
I loved each verse and each verse seems to stand alone. Verse one could be titled Eternal Geometry..verse two Divinity Revealed..verse three Microscopic Knowledge..Light & Love PS try Chrysalis Torn...I think you'll like it.
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Date: 12/23/2008 1:44:00 PM
There is a passage in a book by Mark Helprin which deals with time, and man's perception of it... my email address is keithbickerstaffe@yahoo.com. If you email me your address will be protected, and I will certainly hold it in strictest confidence. This is a remarkable piece, full of vivid imagery and exceptional language! BRAVO Patricia!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/13/2008 4:27:00 PM
Wow! What a wonderful inspirational poem. I'm glad I ran across it again. The imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. I hope you will be posting more poetry. Blessings to you for sharing this one with us. Karen
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