Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Verse

Eternity Within Me Touches

Waves cascade
Seagulls soar, crabs scurry
As sounds recede, the silence rubs
Something close to eternity
Within touches.

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January 11, 2015
Form : Verse ( 29 syllable count)
Dr. Ram Mehta
Second Place win
Contest:  Somewhere by nette onclaud

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James Fraser January 16, 2015 at 2:51 PM Indeed, somewhere I'd like to be, nice one, James :)

M. L. Kiser January 15, 2015 at 5:06 AM Isn't it amazing what nature can awake in us? A great write!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 15, 2015 at 1:44 AM Superb write n win Dr. Ram !

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2015 at 12:42 AM this is really good, dr. Ram. a well deserved win. Congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A January 14, 2015 at 9:29 PM Dr Ram, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~

Archana Garg January 14, 2015 at 10:25 AM Beautiful write, Dr. Ram. Congrats on the win...

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 14, 2015 at 10:05 AM Congrats on win Mehtasaab-rajat

Kayod5 Kayode January 14, 2015 at 12:58 AM Congrats on the win Dr. Ram...huggs

Dr. Vandana Sharma January 13, 2015 at 11:35 PM Very beautiful lines, best wishes.......

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 13, 2015 at 11:04 PM Beautiful, Dr. Ram...reads like a dream. Congrat to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Eve Roper January 13, 2015 at 8:52 PM Dr. Ram Mehta, congratulaitons on your win, a still life painting with your pen.7 Blessings

Casarah Nance January 13, 2015 at 5:36 PM That sounds great! I would enjoy that somewhere! Grats on your win!

Carrie Richards January 13, 2015 at 4:58 PM What a lovely, winning write, Dr. Ram ! Congratulations on your placement !

Jan Allison January 13, 2015 at 2:39 PM beautiful imagery sounds idyllic - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight January 13, 2015 at 2:02 PM Hi Dr. Ram, stopping back to congratulate you on your win! Sandra

Robert Stoner Jr January 13, 2015 at 1:00 PM congratultions Dr. M on this winning poem well done

Sandra Haight January 11, 2015 at 7:13 PM Beautiful verse, Dr. Ram, that presents such a beautiful vision of your "somewhere" by the beautiful ocean that speaks to you of eternity. Good luck in the contest. Sandra

Carrie Richards January 11, 2015 at 4:38 PM I can smell the scent of salty air, and the beauty of the sea ! Lovely poem, Dr. Ram :)