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Eternity Within Me Touches

Waves cascade Seagulls soar, crabs scurry As sounds recede, the silence rubs Something close to eternity Within touches. +++ January 11, 2015 Form : Verse ( 29 syllable count) Dr. Ram Mehta Second Place win Contest: Somewhere by nette onclaud

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James Fraser

Date: 1/16/2015 2:51:00 PM

Indeed, somewhere I'd like to be, nice one, James :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/15/2015 5:06:00 AM

Isn't it amazing what nature can awake in us? A great write!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/15/2015 1:44:00 AM

Superb write n win Dr. Ram !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2015 12:42:00 AM

this is really good, dr. Ram. a well deserved win. Congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2015 9:29:00 PM

Dr Ram, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~

Archana Garg

Date: 1/14/2015 10:25:00 AM

Beautiful write, Dr. Ram. Congrats on the win...

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/14/2015 10:05:00 AM

Congrats on win Mehtasaab-rajat

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/14/2015 12:58:00 AM

Congrats on the win Dr. Ram...huggs

Vandana Sharma

Date: 1/13/2015 11:35:00 PM

Very beautiful lines, best wishes.......

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/13/2015 11:04:00 PM

Beautiful, Dr. Ram...reads like a dream. Congrat to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Eve Roper

Date: 1/13/2015 8:52:00 PM

Dr. Ram Mehta, congratulaitons on your win, a still life painting with your pen.7 Blessings

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/13/2015 5:36:00 PM

That sounds great! I would enjoy that somewhere! Grats on your win!

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/13/2015 4:58:00 PM

What a lovely, winning write, Dr. Ram ! Congratulations on your placement !

Jan Allison

Date: 1/13/2015 2:39:00 PM

beautiful imagery sounds idyllic - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/13/2015 2:02:00 PM

Hi Dr. Ram, stopping back to congratulate you on your win! Sandra

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 1/13/2015 1:00:00 PM

congratultions Dr. M on this winning poem well done

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/11/2015 7:13:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Dr. Ram, that presents such a beautiful vision of your "somewhere" by the beautiful ocean that speaks to you of eternity. Good luck in the contest. Sandra

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/11/2015 4:38:00 PM

I can smell the scent of salty air, and the beauty of the sea ! Lovely poem, Dr. Ram :)