P.S. Awtry Poet Verse

Eternity Whispers

night is spent
dawn hesitates
selah

between heart beats
silent cesura
holy hush

belief
amid doubt
stands still

a moment
twinkling spark
of recognition

infinitesimal
but
undeniable




September 29, 2019

(Yalto)

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Ann Peck January 27, 2022 at 8:27 AM A beautiful, spiritual poem, P.S. --Belief amid doubt stands still--those words touched my heart. I'm faving this poem :) P.S. Awtry January 27, 2022 at 2:22 PM Thank you Ann :) -ps

John Lawless January 25, 2022 at 5:10 AM Beautifully done!!! congrats. P.S. Awtry January 25, 2022 at 11:44 AM Thank you so much John! ~ps

Unseeking Seeker January 25, 2022 at 12:48 AM Wow! So happy to discover this gem, made possible by your participation, PS! Congrats on your (inevitable) win! P.S. Awtry January 25, 2022 at 11:44 AM So glad you liked this one and very honored to have placed in your contest! Thank you very much ~ps

Connie Marcum Wong January 24, 2022 at 10:22 PM Wow P.S.! This is the best Yalto I have ever read. It whispers of sacredness and inspires the soul. Just beautiful my friend. Congratulations on your wonderful podium win. Blessings xxoo P.S. Awtry January 25, 2022 at 11:43 AM You are too kind Connie. I am so glad you liked this one. ~ps

Susan Ashley March 31, 2020 at 7:05 PM The profound thoughts and depth of beauty in your poem is undeniable, P.S. Your imagery is lush yet leaves space for one to linger and ponder its loveliness. Warmest wishes always, my talented friend.. ~Susan P.S. Awtry April 4, 2020 at 6:49 PM thank you so much Susan! :)

Panagiota Romios December 15, 2019 at 10:13 AM Outstanding, PS And deep.. PANAGIOTA P.S. Awtry December 15, 2019 at 11:02 AM Thank you Panagiota:)

Heidi Sands October 5, 2019 at 11:37 AM This is beautiful to read today :) Very nice! P.S. Awtry October 5, 2019 at 12:04 PM Thank you Heidi. So glad you liked it.

Brenda Chiri October 2, 2019 at 3:25 PM Oh wow simply amazing my friend! I loved it!;) P.S. Awtry October 2, 2019 at 4:09 PM Thank you very much:)

Winged Warrior October 2, 2019 at 9:10 AM Superbly executed my friend...great verse P.S...^WW^ :o) P.S. Awtry October 2, 2019 at 9:49 AM Thank you very much! :)

Michelle Faulkner October 1, 2019 at 5:17 PM Poignant and touching, the last 3 words really got to me - I agree, undeniable! P.S. Awtry October 1, 2019 at 5:52 PM Thank you so much Michelle. With this one I was trying to talk about something I'm not sure I even understand... So glad that you connected with it :)

Panagiota Romios October 1, 2019 at 1:11 PM Great and a fantastic poem. Like Gershon, I don't think I can write Yalto. Panagiota P.S. Awtry October 1, 2019 at 2:16 PM Thank you Panagiota for your generous compliment. :)

Line Gauthier September 30, 2019 at 4:46 PM Bravo, PS. Another excellent poem. P.S. Awtry September 30, 2019 at 4:49 PM Thank you Line! So glad to be writing again. -ps

Gershon Wolf September 29, 2019 at 2:37 PM To write yalto I don't think I could // but I do know this is awfully good!! There's a little couplet to give you my opinion of this marvelous, poetic write! Smiles, Gershon P.S. Awtry September 29, 2019 at 2:48 PM Thank you for your marvelous comment! :) ~ps

Vijay Pandit September 29, 2019 at 8:14 AM Just great my friend..from start to end. P.S. Awtry September 29, 2019 at 1:36 PM Thank you Vijay :) ~ps

Bobby May September 29, 2019 at 5:55 AM Beautiful P.S.!! P.S. Awtry September 29, 2019 at 11:37 AM Thank you, Bobby! So glad you liked it! ~ps

Silent One September 29, 2019 at 5:28 AM This is just lovely... P.S. Awtry September 29, 2019 at 11:36 AM Thank you Silent One. :) ~ps

Connie Marcum Wong September 29, 2019 at 4:11 AM A very lovely Yalto. I have not attempted this form yet. Yours shines! xxoo P.S. Awtry September 29, 2019 at 4:14 AM Thank you so much! I am always delighted to hear from you! ~ps