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Eternity Whispers


night is spent
dawn hesitates
selah

between heart beats
silent cesura
holy hush

belief
amid doubt
stands still

a moment
twinkling spark
of recognition

infinitesimal
but
undeniable




September 29, 2019

(Yalto)

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Ann Peck

Date: 1/27/2022 8:27:00 AM

A beautiful, spiritual poem, P.S. --Belief amid doubt stands still--those words touched my heart. I'm faving this poem :)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/27/2022 2:22:00 PM

Thank you Ann :) -ps

John Lawless

Date: 1/25/2022 5:10:00 AM

Beautifully done!!! congrats.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/25/2022 11:44:00 AM

Thank you so much John! ~ps

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/25/2022 12:48:00 AM

Wow! So happy to discover this gem, made possible by your participation, PS! Congrats on your (inevitable) win!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/25/2022 11:44:00 AM

So glad you liked this one and very honored to have placed in your contest! Thank you very much ~ps

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/24/2022 10:22:00 PM

Wow P.S.! This is the best Yalto I have ever read. It whispers of sacredness and inspires the soul. Just beautiful my friend. Congratulations on your wonderful podium win. Blessings xxoo

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/25/2022 11:43:00 AM

You are too kind Connie. I am so glad you liked this one. ~ps

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/31/2020 7:05:00 PM

The profound thoughts and depth of beauty in your poem is undeniable, P.S. Your imagery is lush yet leaves space for one to linger and ponder its loveliness. Warmest wishes always, my talented friend.. ~Susan

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/4/2020 6:49:00 PM

thank you so much Susan! :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/15/2019 10:13:00 AM

Outstanding, PS And deep.. PANAGIOTA

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/15/2019 11:02:00 AM

Thank you Panagiota:)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/5/2019 11:37:00 AM

This is beautiful to read today :) Very nice!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/5/2019 12:04:00 PM

Thank you Heidi. So glad you liked it.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/2/2019 3:25:00 PM

Oh wow simply amazing my friend! I loved it!;)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/2/2019 4:09:00 PM

Thank you very much:)

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/2/2019 9:10:00 AM

Superbly executed my friend...great verse P.S...^WW^ :o)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/2/2019 9:49:00 AM

Thank you very much! :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/1/2019 5:17:00 PM

Poignant and touching, the last 3 words really got to me - I agree, undeniable!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/1/2019 5:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Michelle. With this one I was trying to talk about something I'm not sure I even understand... So glad that you connected with it :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/1/2019 1:11:00 PM

Great and a fantastic poem. Like Gershon, I don't think I can write Yalto. Panagiota

P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/1/2019 2:16:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota for your generous compliment. :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/30/2019 4:46:00 PM

Bravo, PS. Another excellent poem.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 9/30/2019 4:49:00 PM

Thank you Line! So glad to be writing again. -ps

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/29/2019 2:37:00 PM

To write yalto I don't think I could // but I do know this is awfully good!! There's a little couplet to give you my opinion of this marvelous, poetic write! Smiles, Gershon

P.S. Awtry
Date: 9/29/2019 2:48:00 PM

Thank you for your marvelous comment! :) ~ps