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Eternity

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*2nd Place*
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Poetic Form: Verse
Contest Judged: 2024 July 17 
Sponsored by: Joseph May
Image: Picture #1

#1 Catching a glimpse of parting Watching the sunset so calming Admiring the shadows all climbing Listening to my appeasing whispering Revisiting spiritual moments of blessing

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Tonye George
Date: 7/20/2024 3:20:00 PM
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Congratulations Dear, Hilo on your win. Cheers.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/20/2024 3:36:00 PM
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Me'thanks, Tonye, I just note there's a void of info some sponsors ask prior to submission. Some don't like Suze, but I don't bother with trivials, where's the point. Aloha William
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2024 8:52:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win. "Eternity" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading it... Have a great day writing away.................
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/18/2024 9:11:00 AM
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Thank you, Paula, for kind share, Aloha William
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Joseph May
Date: 7/18/2024 5:48:00 AM
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Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/18/2024 5:56:00 AM
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Thanks, Joseph, Aloha William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2024 5:06:00 PM
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The near rhymes elevate this poem in an ethereal way. Congrats!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/17/2024 5:36:00 PM
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Ditto, thanks my friend, Aloha William

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