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Eternity

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*2nd Place*
Paint A Picture
Poetic Form: Verse
Contest Judged: 2024 July 17 
Sponsored by: Joseph May
Image: Picture #1

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Catching a glimpse of parting
Watching the sunset so calming
Admiring the shadows all climbing
Listening to my appeasing whispering
Revisiting spiritual moments of blessing

Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024

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Tonye George Date: 7/20/2024 3:20:00 PM Congratulations Dear, Hilo on your win. Cheers. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/20/2024 3:36:00 PM Me'thanks, Tonye, I just note there's a void of info some sponsors ask prior to submission. Some don't like Suze, but I don't bother with trivials, where's the point. Aloha William

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/18/2024 8:52:00 AM Congratulations on your win. "Eternity" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading it... Have a great day writing away................. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/18/2024 9:11:00 AM Thank you, Paula, for kind share, Aloha William

Joseph May Date: 7/18/2024 5:48:00 AM Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/18/2024 5:56:00 AM Thanks, Joseph, Aloha William

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/17/2024 5:06:00 PM The near rhymes elevate this poem in an ethereal way. Congrats! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/17/2024 5:36:00 PM Ditto, thanks my friend, Aloha William