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Eternally Beautiful

speaking from the soul in ways that touch feelings sweetly eternal bliss deep within words draw passion burning hot desire softly you hold within your hands emotions of the heart under the skin cotton soft gentle lips fluttering kisses deep inside it's you love igniting sparks burning desires who makes life complete love it's you from now until the sands of time run out we walk soul to soul two hearts together in eternity within you i found paradise

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Date: 11/24/2013 1:54:00 PM
Liam This is so endearing and loving. I can feel the emotion pouring out of your heart and soul. The devotion and sentiment is expressed in a caring way. Nice job
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Date: 11/4/2013 2:53:00 PM
A beautifully expressed piece of poetry, that was written straight from the heart. Wonderful, wonderful work, my friend! I enjoyed it very much!
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Date: 11/4/2013 8:36:00 AM
hi there, partner in poetry...this is a stand-out, lovingly expressed...:) huggs
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Date: 11/4/2013 6:33:00 AM
- A pleasure to read this beautiful poem, Liam - Wish you a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/4/2013 5:47:00 AM
Beautifully done old pal. Loved it !
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Date: 11/3/2013 5:54:00 PM
such a beautifully penned sensual write... a love that's flows from within a heart through the soul is the most wonderful of all....love this poem....simply gorgeous :)
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Date: 11/3/2013 1:59:00 PM
With you i found paradise-this line gives so much serenity to the soul..And to.have and love someone till the sands of time..that s a huge but beautiful promise.Very beautiful Liam.
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Date: 11/3/2013 1:11:00 PM
Another gem.... :) She is fortunate to inspire you to write so beautifully, Liam....
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/3/2013 1:16:00 PM
if only its a dream gem soul i see wishing in faraway stars that dazzles

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