Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Eternal Teardrops

 Eternal Teardrops

  
  Eternal teardrops trapped in tangled tautological time...

           Through the infinite voids, my liquid love longs for you, 

  admits dimensional vaporous vortexes a cosmic climb

           Within each teardrop an ocean, a deluge of love’s bliss,

 drowning in tenacious tears of the love that I will miss

           With reflections of you in each drop drip before my view,

  and moist echoes cascading in love's parallel paradigm.




Music Video by Martin Garrix feat. Khalid - 'Ocean'



Aug.08.2018
Rhyme Time 6 - Verses of Metaphors 
Sponsored by: Laura Loo


#.1 for contest

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Beautiful Scars September 11, 2018 at 6:02 AM that first line is was captivated me dear WW, great poem...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement...:)-luloo

John Gondolf August 11, 2018 at 3:34 PM Beautifully penned, WW, best of luck in the contest. John

Andrea Dietrich August 10, 2018 at 5:55 PM wow, there are some gorgeous lines being inspired by Laura Loo's latest contest. Well done and sure to be a winner.

Ravi Sathasivam August 10, 2018 at 2:33 AM Excellent. Beautiful imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Gary Bateman August 9, 2018 at 3:51 PM WW, Very beautifully done!! Best of Luck in the contest!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Charlie Smith August 9, 2018 at 10:27 AM Now you're gonna make me go to the dictionary. I just hate it when that happens, Well done, I think WW...

Warren Doll August 9, 2018 at 10:20 AM Brilliant and with so many deep layers, WW. Going into my FAVs./ Warren :)

Kim Rodrigues August 8, 2018 at 10:04 PM Interesting write! Enjoyed, WW!

Eve Roper August 8, 2018 at 9:34 PM Nicely done, ^WW^, love the beautiful imagery ,, your writing is well done... Enjoyed reading ... Hugs Eve

Susan Ashley August 8, 2018 at 9:29 PM Poignant teardrops shed, in scintillant metaphoric beauty, for a lost love, Winged Warrior. An exquisite write especially your last line. Bets wishes for a win mu poetic friend.. ~Susan

White Wolf August 8, 2018 at 7:43 PM Absolutely love this one, matey. Best of luck in the contest. Reads like a winner to me.