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Eternal Teardrops

Eternal Teardrops Eternal teardrops trapped in tangled tautological time... Through the infinite voids, my liquid love longs for you, admits dimensional vaporous vortexes a cosmic climb Within each teardrop an ocean, a deluge of love’s bliss, drowning in tenacious tears of the love that I will miss With reflections of you in each drop drip before my view, and moist echoes cascading in love's parallel paradigm. Music Video by Martin Garrix feat. Khalid - 'Ocean' Aug.08.2018 Rhyme Time 6 - Verses of Metaphors Sponsored by: Laura Loo #.1 for contest

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Lu Loo

Date: 9/11/2018 6:02:00 AM

that first line is was captivated me dear WW, great poem...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement...:)-luloo

John Gondolf

Date: 8/11/2018 3:34:00 PM

Beautifully penned, WW, best of luck in the contest. John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2018 5:55:00 PM

wow, there are some gorgeous lines being inspired by Laura Loo's latest contest. Well done and sure to be a winner.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/10/2018 2:33:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Gary Bateman

Date: 8/9/2018 3:51:00 PM

WW, Very beautifully done!! Best of Luck in the contest!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/9/2018 10:27:00 AM

Now you're gonna make me go to the dictionary. I just hate it when that happens, Well done, I think WW...

Warren Doll

Date: 8/9/2018 10:20:00 AM

Brilliant and with so many deep layers, WW. Going into my FAVs./ Warren :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/8/2018 10:04:00 PM

Interesting write! Enjoyed, WW!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/8/2018 9:34:00 PM

Nicely done, ^WW^, love the beautiful imagery ,, your writing is well done... Enjoyed reading ... Hugs Eve

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/8/2018 9:29:00 PM

Poignant teardrops shed, in scintillant metaphoric beauty, for a lost love, Winged Warrior. An exquisite write especially your last line. Bets wishes for a win mu poetic friend.. ~Susan

White Wolf

Date: 8/8/2018 7:43:00 PM

Absolutely love this one, matey. Best of luck in the contest. Reads like a winner to me.