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I won't be entering poems in the contest for a while. The contests give me a topic to write about, though. Thanks.

Eternal Spring

A seedling stirs beneath the dawn’s embrace,
Its roots are entwined with whispers from the earth.
Each glance exchanged, a sunbeam’s fleeting trace,
Ignites the bloom of love—a second birth.
The breeze of laughter, soft, adorns the space,
While petals glow, revealing newfound worth.
A garden thrives where hearts like rivers flow,
Its blossoms are bright, eternal in their glow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 3:52 PM
Very beautiful, Jay
George Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 8:44 PM
Wow... so beautiful.... ! "A seedling stirs beneath the dawn’s embrace, Its roots are entwined with whispers from the earth." A lovely opening to a beautiful poem. Sad, you are not entering the contest after writing such eligible poems worthy of placement.
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