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I won't be entering poems in the contest for a while. The contests give me a topic to write about, though. Thanks.

A seedling stirs beneath the dawn’s embrace, Its roots are entwined with whispers from the earth. Each glance exchanged, a sunbeam’s fleeting trace, Ignites the bloom of love—a second birth. The breeze of laughter, soft, adorns the space, While petals glow, revealing newfound worth. A garden thrives where hearts like rivers flow, Its blossoms are bright, eternal in their glow.

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Date: 2/21/2025 3:52:00 PM
Very beautiful, Jay
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Date: 1/13/2025 8:44:00 PM
Wow... so beautiful.... ! "A seedling stirs beneath the dawn’s embrace, Its roots are entwined with whispers from the earth." A lovely opening to a beautiful poem. Sad, you are not entering the contest after writing such eligible poems worthy of placement.
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