Eternal Migration

- A Love Story -


*Unpredictable enigma with a pony tail of willows
**An exiled from deserts by the Despotic Thirst
***Deadly in her games yet playing with prisms
****Humans longing, chanting, reciting her name...

*****I am still her lover - wandering man who can't cry
******She sneaked in my heart and stole all my tears
********My ship has her name engraved by a thunder
*********I' m  the eternal migrant looking for... RAIN... 
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 iolanda scripca

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/23/2011 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:22:00 PM
If Deb likes this, then I like it as well. Congratulations on winning in her contest.
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your grand win in the contest, Iolanda. Sorry, I'm behind in everything. Always, great work! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:26:00 PM
Hi Iolanda - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
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Date: 2/12/2011 8:40:00 AM
How did I miss this one?? Love it, Iolanda....what a unique and clever free verse!! Congratulations....and hope all is going as smoothly as possible right now? God Bless!
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Date: 2/11/2011 8:30:00 PM
Awesome. Many congratulations for this success.
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations Iolanda on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:32:00 PM
What a great ending on this one, Iolanda. Love how you made this a love story. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2011 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Contest, Iolanda. I think this is beautiful! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of constance, Iolanda
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:19:00 PM
Many Congrats Iolanda on big win with this imaginative STARRY verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/1/2011 2:18:00 PM
smart very smart. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 12/31/2010 1:41:00 PM
An excellent write. Phyl soup mail
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Date: 12/30/2010 4:53:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Iolanda. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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