Eternal Migration

- A Love Story -


*Unpredictable enigma with a pony tail of willows
**An exiled from deserts by the Despotic Thirst
***Deadly in her games yet playing with prisms
****Humans longing, chanting, reciting her name...

*****I am still her lover - wandering man who can't cry
******She sneaked in my heart and stole all my tears
********My ship has her name engraved by a thunder
*********I' m  the eternal migrant looking for... RAIN... 
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 iolanda scripca
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Iolanda. Love, Carol
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February 15, 2011 at 6:22 PM
If Deb likes this, then I like it as well. Congratulations on winning in her contest.
Haick Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 4:31 PM
Congratulations on your grand win in the contest, Iolanda. Sorry, I'm behind in everything. Always, great work! Love, Annalise
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February 12, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Hi Iolanda - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
Richards Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 8:40 AM
How did I miss this one?? Love it, Iolanda....what a unique and clever free verse!! Congratulations....and hope all is going as smoothly as possible right now? God Bless!
Mannan Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Awesome. Many congratulations for this success.
Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 9:30 AM
Congratulations Iolanda on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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January 13, 2011 at 4:32 PM
What a great ending on this one, Iolanda. Love how you made this a love story. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Haick Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 1:29 PM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Contest, Iolanda. I think this is beautiful! Love, Annalise
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January 13, 2011 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of constance, Iolanda
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January 12, 2011 at 9:19 PM
Many Congrats Iolanda on big win with this imaginative STARRY verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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January 1, 2011 at 2:18 PM
smart very smart. John Henry Loving III
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December 31, 2010 at 1:41 PM
An excellent write. Phyl soup mail
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 4:53 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Iolanda. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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