Eternal Lover

Such pretty words

You use 

To describe

The intensity

Of the feelings

Inside

I would

For you

Bruise

Even bleed

For only

A moment's 

Taste of need

Pillowy 

Whispered 

Words of desire

Between 

My thighs 

Your liquid fire

Sore lips

And breast

Cravenly crushed

My body

And Cheeks 

Exquisitely flushed

Love's reflection

In the pools

Of your eyes

Brought 

To completion

By my

Eternal lover's

Sighs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Burton Avatar
August 2, 2008 at 12:45 PM
you really should think about writing a book or something.great poem
Brown Avatar
July 10, 2008 at 6:38 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Lacy. I hope you will continue to write and share your excellent poetry with us. Love, Carol
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