Eternal Love

For it is your name written 
across my heart
and will remain long after 
the sound of it’s final beat. 

14.1.2021
Sponsor: Line Gauther
Contest:20 words poem (1st Place)
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Canerdy Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 6:41 AM
So lovely and moving! CONGRATS on your win, Carol. Janice
Jayasankar Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 2:34 AM
Such a nice entry and so much brings out the 'feel'. Congrats on your win Carol. Have a great day ~ Ani
Mitra Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 3:00 AM
Thanks Ani....much love to you :)
Thomas Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 3:51 PM
Oh how very beautiful Carol! Congrats on your placement.
Mitra Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 12:34 AM
Thanks FJ....much appreciated :))
Mitra Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 12:34 AM
Thanks FJ....much appreciated :))
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 12:57 PM
beautifully penned many congrats Carol:-) xx
Mitra Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 12:33 AM
Thanks dear Jan....hugs :))
George   Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 3:28 AM
THIS IS BRILLANT, CAROL! SO MUCH SAID WITH SO FEW WORDS. ~ Elaine
Mitra Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 4:02 AM
Thanks dear Elaine....much love.
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