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Shimmering brightly In the darkest of skies Reaching down to guide me Through nightly brawls With melancholy visions That flood my heart with Secret hues of misery Discovered within the mind Who knows what it means To break with earth shattering Mistakes, despair and fear Facing lost grace and vanished Inspiration, insight, imagination Flooding the peace within By leaving off sensations of Passionate impulses and urgency To lay aside the sorrow and gloom For the opportunity to dance With the moon, in a light of yearning For truths hidden behind the brilliance Of glistening starlight breathing Intimacy into the spiritual realms Within souls who know that God Gave us this sky to awaken hopes And paint wisdom through the Face of a sparkling starlit night One who welcomes spirits into A union of purity and love coming Alive in a dance of purposeful Joy discovered on the rising beams Of compassionate starlight flowing Through the ebony cosmos to leave A impressive light with my name on it The star that awakens the night With grace flowing through space Capturing the colors of mysterious Wisdom and letting the heavens rejoice In the knowing that every star is a wish For harmony with only a hint of vision To lead hearts toward the face of God Where they’ll be met with love that is Alive, filled with passion and acceptance Love that is unconditional and lasts Throughout eternity, forever and ever! There is a star with my name on it Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One November 9, 2020

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Date: 2/16/2021 9:41:00 AM
Just read your poem. Very well written! And I can see it was placed first in the context as well, well deserved... Belated congratulations
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Date: 11/14/2020 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations with your top win, Dear Poet. It's an amazing poem with so many beautiful lines and images. Love, Mala
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Date: 11/13/2020 2:21:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Praise God for His eternal love. Thanks for sharing this... so edifying, and delightful from the start til the end. God bless you.
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Date: 11/12/2020 5:43:00 PM
Congrats Regina....Lovely Eternal Love :)
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Date: 11/12/2020 3:02:00 PM
Striking write, Regina. An outpouring of hope and splendour. Your poems always transmit your faith and inspiration to readers. Huge Congratulations on your Top Win with SO.!
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Date: 11/12/2020 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win Regina :)
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Date: 11/12/2020 12:17:00 PM
Amen. Regina, your ethereal pen spills beauty for "The star that awakens the night", and for life, its yearnings for truth and hope and inner peace, its pains, its passions, its faith, and a guiding star's ability to lead "hearts toward the face of God" and His "eternal Love". So exquisite in its rich reverence and deep wondrous artistry, my dear friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/12/2020 11:59:00 AM
- Congratulations on your top win, Gina ... beautifully written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2020 10:45:00 AM
I think my original message disappeared - sigh. This is just lovely, Gina - a love poem to God. Your last two lines perfectly sum up the preceding poem. So many beautiful lines - "every star is a wish." What a beautiful thought! Congratulations on your first place win! Sending you blessings dear friend!
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Date: 11/12/2020 9:23:00 AM
Congrats on your TOP win with this amazing poem Regina. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 11/12/2020 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations Regina ‘Eternal Love’ is a beautiful poem and so deserving of your first placed win, well done... Belle
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Date: 11/12/2020 8:35:00 AM
I love this poem, you described the star so well.. We all yearn for a love that is eternal and unconditional.. beyond the stars... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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