Caren Krutsinger Poet Imagism

Eternal Gold Sunset

Eternal gold sunset 
Nearer to heaven than the flowers
Buds rising, trying to get there

A temperate complexion
the untrimmed garden
faeries have taken possession

Will they lease 
Or are they here to stay forever?
I seek some shade while I ponder the climate

Faeries climb upon my legs and giggle.
My eyes remain closed
I do not want to ruin this.


Written: 8-02-2019
Contest:  A Summers Day Redo Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner

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Connie Marcum Wong August 30, 2019 at 6:38 PM Outstanding Caren! Congratulations on your win with this enchanting piece. xxoo Caren Krutsinger August 31, 2019 at 2:17 PM Thank you Connie. I appreciate it.

Jennifer Proxenos August 30, 2019 at 8:25 AM Hi Caren, a very cute poem, congratulations! Hugs, Jennifer. Caren Krutsinger August 30, 2019 at 1:05 PM Thank you Jennifer. I appreciate your stopping by.

Michelle Faulkner August 29, 2019 at 3:24 PM What a magical poem, Caren, thanks for entering my contest! Caren Krutsinger August 29, 2019 at 9:01 PM Thank you so much Michelle. I enjoyed entering your contest.

Jennifer Proxenos August 4, 2019 at 1:16 AM A beautiful poem dear Caren and a wonderful write for the contest managing to bring all the words required into play! Well penned. Hugs, Jennifer. Caren Krutsinger August 4, 2019 at 8:02 AM It was enjoyable to try to "stay on task" which has not been required of me for two months.