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Eternal Gold Sunset

Eternal gold sunset Nearer to heaven than the flowers Buds rising, trying to get there A temperate complexion the untrimmed garden faeries have taken possession Will they lease Or are they here to stay forever? I seek some shade while I ponder the climate Faeries climb upon my legs and giggle. My eyes remain closed I do not want to ruin this. Written: 8-02-2019 Contest: A Summers Day Redo Poetry Contest Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner

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Date: 8/30/2019 6:38:00 PM
Outstanding Caren! Congratulations on your win with this enchanting piece. xxoo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/31/2019 2:17:00 PM
Thank you Connie. I appreciate it.
Date: 8/30/2019 8:25:00 AM
Hi Caren, a very cute poem, congratulations! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/30/2019 1:05:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer. I appreciate your stopping by.
Date: 8/29/2019 3:24:00 PM
What a magical poem, Caren, thanks for entering my contest!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/29/2019 9:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Michelle. I enjoyed entering your contest.
Date: 8/4/2019 1:16:00 AM
A beautiful poem dear Caren and a wonderful write for the contest managing to bring all the words required into play! Well penned. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/4/2019 8:02:00 AM
It was enjoyable to try to "stay on task" which has not been required of me for two months.

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