Eternal Fragments

His smile and sob – in exact 
shape – live on my face. Alter 
egos of his tension loiter in 
my mind. 

My big toes – like the tortoises’
heads – are perfect imitations.

The same smell of sweat from 
my armpits rouses his presence.

The sparks within my skull are 
from his furnace. His gene 
reflects in my word and deed.

As I fumble in the snag, light
falls from his antique lantern.

I often see him on the pavement
of my midnight dream.

What he dreamed of me, I dream
of my children. 

When death had chewed my dad,
some eternal fragments fell out
of its mouth.

First published in Encircle, US
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Congratulations Fabiyas, on your win with this sad and unique poem.
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September 20, 2017 at 8:53 PM
Thank you, Susan!
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September 20, 2017 at 1:45 PM
congratulations, Fabiyan!
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September 20, 2017 at 8:52 PM
Thanks, Jack!
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September 20, 2017 at 11:15 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful!
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September 20, 2017 at 11:42 AM
Thanks, Broken Wings!
One Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 6:46 AM
Well written, your take on the contest was an interesting one about your dad.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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September 20, 2017 at 8:26 AM
Thanks, Silent One!
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