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A Room with a View | mostbeautifulgirlscaps

- Eternal Footprints -

Thoughts that lead us into poetry
                         an appetite for a life out of the ordinary
                                        Quiet when needed
                           The will to be playful and imaginative
                                       Sometime humorous,
                        so that the shadow of death will not seize us

                                      The latitudes of longing
                             words that evoke emotion and mood
                                     where poetry never dies
                                     and fire does not gos out
                              even if doors and gates are closed

                                  It's alike finding the right tone
                              to breathe and blow well, find beauty
                                             and deep tones

                                              Ask the wind
                                         It can be a challenge
                                  when it blows outside and inside
                                             at the same time

                                                 Paper dies
                                                  ink fades
                                              but poetry lives
                                               When the sun
                                       slowly drowning in the sea





                                                  27.11.2020
                                           Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                               Where do we poets go? Poetry Contest
                                           Sponsored by: Silent One
                                            2nd place in the contest
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Proxenos Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 9:36 AM
Hi Dear soul sister, a wonderful poem about poets, poems and poetry - Poetry will always live on, it is in our blood and in our hearts and souls, how we began writing and how we end will be a mystery - one day we will discover it. Good luck in the contest my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 11:06 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment ... I got a 2nd place in the contest (29.11 :) , Jenni :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 5:07 AM
When the sun slowly dying in the sea...great poetry!
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:45 AM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Koplin Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 8:35 AM
Wow! Great job!! Congrats on your win!
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:44 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Zahid Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 3:14 AM
Hey congratulations on your win. Cheers! Stay blessed
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:44 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Paghunda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations Anne- Lise: We certainly do need the spirit of poetry in our lives. Beautifully expressed. SuZ
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:43 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Goldsmith Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love your lines, "an appetite for a life out of the ordinary." And "Paper dies ink fades but poetry lives When the sun slowly drowning in the sea." This is a "Wonderful" write. I love it. Enjoy your win with a hug...................
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:43 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 4:52 PM
Paul, is right our work will last forever.. Beautiful write, Sunshine. Congratulations on your win in Silent Ones Contest. My mother in-law was worse then what I explain.
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:42 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcconnell Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 6:28 PM
Such brilliant imagery Anne-Lise, so tenderly penned with insightful thought too. Trust all's well keep safe, hugs and blessings,Gordon
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:45 AM
- Thank you very much, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Thomas Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 1:55 PM
How very beautiful my dear Anne-Lise; I hope you have been well :)
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:42 AM
- I am fine, sister :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Carber Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 10:51 AM
Lovely--like the cryptic 4th stanza [but there's a typo in the 2nd]-congrats on your win, Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:41 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 7:55 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats on your win Anne..
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:40 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 6:04 AM
A marvelous hymn to poetry and poets dearest, Anne-Lise. Marvelously done! Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:39 AM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kindness Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 12:51 AM
"Paper dies ink fades but poetry lives When the sun slowly drowning in the sea" .I like this conclusion and the use of 'wind" as metaphor to describe.Congratulation on your win and place.May you be well and happy...!
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 2:32 AM
- Thank you very much for lovely comment and the congratulations, L.K. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 11:24 PM
I love this, Anne-Lise! Wherever we poets go, it is what we leave behind us that counts, and your delightful poetry will give joy to many! ~ Congratulations on a much deserved win. Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 2:31 AM
- Thank you very much Paul, for lovely comment and the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jayasankar Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 6:28 PM
Congrats on your win dear Anne... your words just flow.. I loved this.. 'Paper dies, ink fades, but poetry lives'. .... Hugs ~ Ani
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 2:30 AM
- Thank you very much for lovely comment and the congratulations, my friend Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Downing  Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 3:12 PM
Congrats, Anne-Lise on your win with this beautiful piece of art... xoxo
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 2:29 AM
- Akkina, thank you very much for the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 12:36 PM
Sunshine smile my dear Sis , a brilliant write, congratulations on your much deserved win. Hope you are well and keeping safe. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 2:30 AM
- Dear sis, thank you very much for lovely comment and the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 11:48 AM
And so will your inspiring words on the infinite wonder of poetry.. a journey only the gifted and spelled by the charm of the words would embark on and savour its unique poetic taste.. A great rendition of the flair and depth of a unique Sunshine Smile! Congratulations, sweet friend, Anne-Lise on your way! So pleased to share such honour and elation! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 2:27 AM
- Thank you very much for lovely comment and the congratulations, Besma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 8:38 AM
The wind can be a challenge, nice use of metaphor to describe the struggle of a poet... A poem that describes the essence of words living forever.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 12:28 PM
- Thank you very much for my place on your winning list, S.O. :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 1:06 AM
You are a prime example, of your poem, Anne-Lise, and like the sun rise you keep coming back, with wonderful poetry.
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 12:27 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 11:01 AM
Yes poetry lives and we live on with it. ~~
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 12:27 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Such lovely poetry, Sunshine, the last stanza is on the spot:)
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 12:26 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 4:07 AM
Love this, sweet lady. It's a blessing to read! Best wishes in the contest. God bless you richly
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 12:26 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 8:24 PM
Beautifully written Anne..hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 12:26 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 8:20 PM
a poet will always live through the realm of his words... even long after he is gone... wonderful write! hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 12:25 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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