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Eternal Breath

See the chuckles of your children, something's missing The quiet days we used to have The last tears I ever shed Never know, what brought us to this day I have no clue or sense The day when you're tired of life Your destiny seems to be broken You, the lost petals of black roses Nightly, night, the orb of night send its lambency As your eternal breath continued your journey Back to the nursery room through the gloom See the babies asleep on your silent creep In your second breath, you're gone I was torn down by the barrier of my sanity No tears that I was able to drop For crowds already bathed you with their melancholy I still see you amid the empty spaces I still sense you among all of us Throw some jokes about the bitter sweetness of life Your eternal breath continues in our time Yanny Widjanarko Eternal Breath Free Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle

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Date: 12/11/2013 3:19:00 PM
a sad one, Yanny and profound. Congrats for your win, dear.
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Date: 11/30/2013 7:52:00 AM
Fantastic poem. Loved it.! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/27/2013 4:05:00 AM
Hi yanny many congrats on your top spot love xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/28/2013 6:04:00 PM
Thanks Mandy, congrats to you too :D hug, Yanny
Date: 11/26/2013 9:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Yanny
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/28/2013 6:03:00 PM
Thanks Dr.Ram, :D hug, Yanny
Date: 11/26/2013 8:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful win..
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/28/2013 6:02:00 PM
Thanks Donna :D and glad to have your visit :D hug, Yanny
Date: 11/26/2013 5:24:00 PM
Yanny, , that is awesome how everyone got a first place... Now that's a fun loving way of saying. Back Off all you haters, it's my contest and I do and enjoy what I want. Love Gail, for that.... Every poem I read was beautiful so far.... ~Hugs & Congratulations with your "Eternal Breath" awesome win... Always ~ LINDA
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/26/2013 5:35:00 PM
Lol, thank you Linda, you really make my day :D hug, Yanny.
Date: 11/26/2013 5:01:00 PM
very powerful write a wonderful poem
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/26/2013 5:33:00 PM
Thank you Joseph, :) hug, Yanny
Date: 11/26/2013 2:32:00 PM
- Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/26/2013 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Anne! :D hug, Yanny
Date: 11/23/2013 7:55:00 AM
That's a very deep and powerful verse Yannie and so sad to have felt it. It sure is a winning verse for me! Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/26/2013 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Debbie, what a pleasure to read your write too :D
Date: 11/22/2013 4:15:00 PM
Good afternoon Yanny.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/26/2013 5:31:00 PM
Good afternoon Rick:D
Date: 11/15/2013 7:56:00 AM
- Take it easy .... feet up on the table .... Enjoy the weekend - eat good meat and healthy drinks, sweet friend Yanny !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/20/2013 9:33:00 AM
Lol, thanks Anne, I am more than relax after reading your second message lol, feel so healthy here :D
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2013 8:06:00 AM
- I must make sure that you relax a little.... lol. - Thanks for the pleasant visit and comments my friend Yanny. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2013 9:57:00 AM
Good morning Yanny.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/20/2013 9:33:00 AM
Good afternoon Rick :D
Date: 11/4/2013 8:05:00 AM
Good morning Yanny.
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Date: 11/3/2013 1:20:00 PM
This is so very sad, I think it will do very well in the contest. It was very nice to have your visit today.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/3/2013 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Rick, glad to have your visit too :D wishing you a lovely day there, hug, Yanny
Date: 11/3/2013 9:00:00 AM
- Yanny, so heartbreaking and yet beautifully (I have one too) - Good luck in the contest! - All the best to you (+ no. one :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/3/2013 9:08:00 AM
Thank you Anne, glad to see your visit today, good luck to you too for the contest, I found yours beautiful as well :D hug, Yanny

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