Eternal Breath

See the chuckles of your children, something's missing
The quiet days we used to have
The last tears I ever shed
Never know, what brought us to this day

I have no clue or sense
The day when you're tired of life
Your destiny seems to be broken
You, the lost petals of black roses  

Nightly, night, the orb of night send its lambency
As your eternal breath continued your journey
Back to the nursery room through the gloom
See the babies asleep on your silent creep

In your second breath, you're gone
I was torn down by the barrier of my sanity
No tears that I was able to drop
For crowds already bathed you with their melancholy 

I still see you amid the empty spaces
I still sense you among all of us
Throw some jokes about the bitter sweetness of life
Your eternal breath continues in our time


Yanny Widjanarko 
Eternal Breath Free Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 3:19 PM
a sad one, Yanny and profound. Congrats for your win, dear.
Sirak Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 7:52 AM
Fantastic poem. Loved it.! Congrats on your win.
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November 27, 2013 at 4:05 AM
Hi yanny many congrats on your top spot love xx
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November 28, 2013 at 6:04 PM
Thanks Mandy, congrats to you too :D hug, Yanny
Mehta Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 9:35 PM
Congrats on your win, Yanny
Widjanarko Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 6:03 PM
Thanks Dr.Ram, :D hug, Yanny
Jones Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 8:21 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful win..
Widjanarko Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 6:02 PM
Thanks Donna :D and glad to have your visit :D hug, Yanny
A   Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:24 PM
Yanny, , that is awesome how everyone got a first place... Now that's a fun loving way of saying. Back Off all you haters, it's my contest and I do and enjoy what I want. Love Gail, for that.... Every poem I read was beautiful so far.... ~Hugs & Congratulations with your "Eternal Breath" awesome win... Always ~ LINDA
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November 26, 2013 at 5:35 PM
Lol, thank you Linda, you really make my day :D hug, Yanny.
Sergi Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:01 PM
very powerful write a wonderful poem
Widjanarko Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:33 PM
Thank you Joseph, :) hug, Yanny
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 2:32 PM
- Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:32 PM
Thank you Anne! :D hug, Yanny
Guzzi Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 7:55 AM
That's a very deep and powerful verse Yannie and so sad to have felt it. It sure is a winning verse for me! Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
Widjanarko Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:32 PM
Thank you Debbie, what a pleasure to read your write too :D
Lamoureux Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 4:15 PM
Good afternoon Yanny.
Widjanarko Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:31 PM
Good afternoon Rick:D
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 7:56 AM
- Take it easy .... feet up on the table .... Enjoy the weekend - eat good meat and healthy drinks, sweet friend Yanny !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 9:33 AM
Lol, thanks Anne, I am more than relax after reading your second message lol, feel so healthy here :D
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 8:06 AM
- I must make sure that you relax a little.... lol. - Thanks for the pleasant visit and comments my friend Yanny. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 9:57 AM
Good morning Yanny.
Widjanarko Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 9:33 AM
Good afternoon Rick :D
Lamoureux Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 8:05 AM
Good morning Yanny.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 1:20 PM
This is so very sad, I think it will do very well in the contest. It was very nice to have your visit today.
Widjanarko Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 5:51 PM
Thank you Rick, glad to have your visit too :D wishing you a lovely day there, hug, Yanny
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 9:00 AM
- Yanny, so heartbreaking and yet beautifully (I have one too) - Good luck in the contest! - All the best to you (+ no. one :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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November 3, 2013 at 9:08 AM
Thank you Anne, glad to see your visit today, good luck to you too for the contest, I found yours beautiful as well :D hug, Yanny
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