Eternal Bliss

Eternal Bliss


                                    Aging leaves predestined to fall

                                  Deafening spectral colors spectacle

                                Mind weakening desiccate organic skin

                                     Imperceptibly rising from within


                                     
                                    Snowstorms drape ebbing spring

                                   Divine wind cradles vulnerable wing

                                  Heart dying repose upon mystic abyss

                                      Absolution bestows eternal bliss










                                           Penned: 2017
                                                        West Palm Beach
                                                        Florida USA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Boles Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 11:14 AM
Your interpretation of this poem is "spot on" Valsa! You are humane, intelligent, and an enlightened spirit. I always look forward to hearing your thoughts. Thanks as always!...ab
George Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 9:52 PM
As aging leaves will definitely fall, the aging body also will have to surrender to death once. But if we gain absolution from all guilt, we are assured of eternal bliss ! Your poems are too profound to be interpreted
Goldsmith Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Nature is filled with color just like this write. From snow white ground cover to the pretty leaves in the fall. Have a blessed day colorful day..................
Boles Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 1:51 PM
Thanks again Paula G.! Wishing you good health...ab
Wolf Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 5:57 PM
You are the profounder propounder, Anselmo. Kudos, Gershon
Boles Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Really appreciate your warm and uplifting words G.W.! Thank you!!...ab
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