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Eternal Bliss

While I looked at  mountains, high
And cotton - like clouds in the sky
I saw the shadow on the hill
Coming from above,  to fulfill 
And as I looked at calm water
I felt like there was not a blur
Colorful scenery, so clear
Spread out before me, oh so near
God has granted us all of this
This beautiful eternal bliss!

Heidi Sands 

9/19/19

To go with recent photo enclosed :). ,,Delay with photo..sorry!
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Hamilton Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 10:07 AM
Beautiful and serene words paint a wonderful picture, well done Heidi, eternal bliss indeed!
Sands Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 11:00 AM
Thank you very much John. I appreciate your kind comment in this :)
Laurie Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 2:11 AM
Hello Heidi … nicely painted with words Heidi - Lindsay
Sands Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 10:59 AM
Hi Lindsay. Thank you for your kind visit and comment :)
Freak Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 2:29 PM
I love this! Thanks for sharing!
Sands Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 2:31 PM
I am happy to hear you love this. ...thank you, and you are very welcome :)
Green Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 11:58 AM
Absolutely beautiful my friend. I would worry about the picture because this poem paints an amazing one for me.
Sands Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 1:55 PM
Happy to hear the poem paints an amazing one. Thank you so much. You brought a smile :)
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 11:49 AM
- Don't need a photo ... I can see the beauty :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 1:54 PM
Oh wow, thank you Anne-Lise! I am happy you can see it :)
There Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Can't wait for the photo ~ it's going to be amazing, I just know it! You painted a scene so serene... a gift indeed :)
Sands Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Great, I will get the photo here as soon as I can. I have to get through some things first, then figure out how, with a missing piece to my computer, but, the poem is directly from the photo of a recent scene I saw. Thank you so much for your kind comment :)
Michael Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 10:55 AM
What's that shadow...a bliss of kiss for all...Nice one Heidi...
Sands Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 10:58 AM
I am missing a part of my tablet device for the keyboard and mouse where I am...so I am having trouble getting the photo on here with my poem. But, yes , that can be a kiss for all :). Thank you Arturo!
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