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Written for the prompt " etched in stone" sponsored by Edward Ibeh

Etched in Stone

I gaze out my glass doors,
engrossed in
the clamorous cadence
of screeching stillness,
emitting electric tones
of love etched in stones,
and fervent flares of fireflies,
stolen from the riverbed of memories,
where songs we played on repeat~
to the moon and stars
weeping in darkness~
reverberate like redolent refrains…

And in this s i l e n c e,
I question every word unwritten,
as the essence of unspoken phases 
mean everything
to the abandoned shadows,
searching for a purpose
amidst ephemeral threads~
of weariness we wear,
when white noise engulfs
serene, salty caves,
where nothing stays constant
but the garnet gravels,
glazed with smothered fears,
singing scars,
mirroring stained pearls,
resting in the heart
of cacophonous currents.

I’ve long known that
the pain
I breathe
is not heavier than the burden
you bear like a warrior,
armored with scales of strength.
Remember when gusts of grief
blurred the sparks flying
across your horizon?
I chose to walk
beneath the shivering skyline,
for I’ve tasted ivory tears
of the crescent,
felt the citrine warmth
drifting through dusky flickers,
as in your arms, every tornado
unfurls twinkling tenors of
turquoise tomorrows,
calming twisted tides,
ferrying lagoon lies, with lucid lullabies.

I’m still tied to the s i l k and l a c e
of the soaring lunar rays,
  entwined in an emerald dream
carved with ethereal mists...
A saga,
    eternally engraved
    in the fated cusp of emptiness,
waiting for the rebirth of
          entombed longings,
true love lingers like 
   a ghost of an ebony rose
in the graveyard
           of buried promises...
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Ibeh Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 9:22 PM
Truly spectacular, Inky. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest. You never fail to amaze!
Hind Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 8:34 PM
A beautiful piece, Ink - pure music.
Beaufort Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 8:37 AM
IE, you have me pondering about feelings for the living, but perhaps also for the departed. I do believe we also may have feelings for people who will not reciprocate, and that is really rough. They’re not dead, but they might make us feel like we are. Then, of course we know the dead aren’t pining for love, but it seems though they might. This has a graveyard feel to me. I could be totally wrong, of course…a painter once told me it’s all out of his hands once the art leaves the studio. Smiles!
George Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 9:22 AM
"every tornado unfurls twinkling tenors of turquoise tomorrows, calming twisted tides, ferrying lagoon lies, with lucid lullabies." Amazing alliterations and metaphors. Your portrayal of grief, of love worn and weathered, feels so visceral, so alive, and yet there’s this haunting peace in it, as if the very pain is part of something divine—something inevitable. Every line is a breath, a heartbeat. Truly, you've woven a dream in words, Inky. I’m almost afraid to blink, so it doesn't slip away.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 1:23 AM
A great meditation on love and its memories. Great emotions are depicted and interspersed with profound imagery. Your poetry always evokes a feeling of beauty.
Greenhough Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 8:17 PM
This is a lovely, romantic poem. It has a sense of being lost. Perhaps the etched stones are the only anchors in a world of change.
Empress Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 12:11 AM
Awn i always appreciate your kind comments dear hilda . Thank you so much
Liguori Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 6:37 PM
‘ entwined in an emerald dream carved with ethereal mists’… your poem is so dreamy. It’s nice to imagine all the goodness you bring with your write. I enjoyed reading this one a lot!!!
Empress Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 12:11 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind and generous support
Poet Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 7:36 AM
Dearest Ink, this is an outstanding poem that delves into issues of love, loss, memory, and the quest for meaning amid stillness and emotional anguish. It explores the complexities of relationships, as well as the lingering anguish of whispered words and unfulfilled goals. The artwork conveys a sense of desire and meditation, emphasizing the interplay between joy and grief. Your word choice is rich and expressive, employing strong images to produce a tangible impact. The words "clamorous cadence," "electric tones," "garnet gravels," and "ivory tears" all evoke a sense of beauty and agony. The use of adjectives and metaphors deepens the poem's emotional environment.
Empress Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 12:07 AM
Thank you so very much dr sotto for your detailed comment! Truly grateful
Eslinger Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Hi, Empress, back after awhile away, i read here ! Inspired & inspiring! some unforgettable image full phrases like your Start w/ clamorous cadence & the Fab riverbed of memories. What a great metaphor! IMHO a super entry, taking what’s etched in stone to the stars!! Love ya!
Empress Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 12:00 AM
So good to see you back! Im going to read you now! Hope you are doing well
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 5:12 AM
Dear Empress, this is a tempest wrapped in silk, a symphony of sounds where sorrow and strength entwine. I love how your words shimmer, weightless yet amazing, like hidden truths in moonlight. I stand in awe of the depth you’ve unveiled. Stunning work! A Fav! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Empress Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind support dear daniel, so very grateful always
Rolland Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 11:05 PM
great emotion, a so touching poetry who reverberates your soul, mix of sadness and happiness, images are graceful, sounds are perfect, a great poem to be read, thanks poet
Empress Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 11:59 PM
Thank you always dear yann for your kind support
Singh Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 8:31 PM
Emotion expressed in beautiful lines.Very nice
Empress Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 11:59 PM
Thank you so much dear akham
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 12:36 PM
Heartfelt poem! Best wishes and hopes ~ AA
Empress Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 11:57 PM
Thank you dear abdullah
Rhymes Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 10:58 AM
Buried promises !!!!! Hmmm felt it
Empress Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 11:57 PM
Thank you so very much
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