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Etched In My Mind

These strings hum sweetly and, Paint my heart black. Black with a hint of bitter temptation. Like the lust on her crimson lips, Which I do kiss. To attain a sweet salvation, That comes and goes like the, Trickling of sand in an hourglass. A sweet salvation forever etched, In my mind as it marinades for eons to come.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/17/2010 5:01:00 PM
Beautiful write. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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