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The sun has set upon the hills
The moonlight glares as my body
Awaits the embrace of dreams.
 
My mind wanders, my thoughts drift
A noise stirs in the silence,
The crash foreshadows more.
 
A scream—is it my mother?
A boom, more yelling too,
A thud, is that my brother?

The men invade my room
I follow them and do as I’m told,
Kill them, they say, and hand me a knife.
 
I feel the fear in my family’s eyes,
My chance for life rests in their destruction
I give into my captors’ demand,
Coating my hands in unwashable stains.

My leaders delight in my compliance,
The tallest one turns to me
He motions to leave.
 
I step into the cold night,
I’m alone and shaking, my eyes leak,
My masters join me; both grinning
The stinging in my head is a joy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 20, 2014 at 4:03 PM
Wow... I am in awe of your work. Another piece that deserves way more recognition. You're a very talented writer. This poem, whether based on a true story or not, has left a mark on me. Awesome job! Always, Laura
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