Essence of Soft Shadows

Life holds a spectrum of possibilities Live it in the moment and ride it into the sunset Dipping my pen into my soul I give words to my thoughts, allowing the sun to shine upon my writing Not letting images darken my future as a storm of thoughts steal my mind Consuming me with a need to know Wanting only shades of excellence, shining light into all darkness not to be overcome by a fool's journey Remember with every downpour there is a rainbow chasing it's beauty so I wont get caught up in a downward spiral Strength is in love as it brings color to my soul With my heart left open none can take from me A hand up does not bring me down rather it lifts me higher Welcoming others inside my heart, Opening myself to those possibilities And if color is absent i still have The Essence of Soft Shadows
2nd place N/A 10/3/2019 Your Best Poem That is Trophy Worthy (Premiere Contest Trophy) Contest 2 Contest Judged: 10/3/2019 Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin I believe it is trophy worth N/A Contest:wow me Sponsored: Nina Parmenter Date:8/22/19
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Na Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 3:25 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Brenda
Chiri Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Thank you gregory!
Ibeh Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 3:22 PM
Wow, hard to believe this splendid poem got N/A twice! Well, 3rd time's the charm, as they say! Congrats, Brenda:-)
Chiri Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 3:25 PM
Thank you Edward I really appreciate that!
Hamilton Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Hard to believe this poem received not one but two N/A'S, must be disheartening not this time, no way this is a beauty, congrats on a fine win Brenda!
Chiri Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 3:01 PM
Wow John thank you! I was about to give up on this poem! Lol! You have gave me my hope back! Haha!
Callus Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 11:38 AM
You have wowed me by this lovely poem, Brenda! Bemoaning our bad fortune does not help; best to leave the darkness of sadness and go out into sunlight where hope awaits. A fav for me. ~Warm regards // paul
Chiri Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 11:41 AM
Ah Paul thank you so much! And that is what I have done! No more darkness for me I came back not to moan and groan but to be better! I appreciate your kind words!;)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 12:54 AM
I hope Nina is wowed by this awe inspiring poem Brenda. I certainly was! I love the way you laid your heart bare before us. Beautiful! : ) xxoo
Chiri Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 12:58 AM
I hope so too Connie! I guess that is a plight of a poet! The heart always seems to shine through! Thank you so much!;)
Mcconnell Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 3:23 PM
Such a beautiful piece Brenda, giving it great imagery with a great expression of words along the way. poetry hugs, Gordon
Chiri Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 12:57 AM
Gordon I really appreciate how you always come and give me a boost of confidence! Thank you!;)
Gondolf Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 12:25 PM
A beautiful write, Bren, a reflection of the poetess herself. All my best. Hugs, John
Chiri Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 12:56 AM
Lol thank you so very much John!;)
Hamilton Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 11:00 AM
This is simply beautiful Brenda, uplifting write that will certainly WOW the contest sponsor, loved this one!
Chiri Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 12:01 PM
John thank you so much! Your words help me to strive to be more than I thought possible! ;)
Green Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 10:53 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Best wishes in the contest
Chiri Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 12:02 PM
Thank you Chris and good luck to you too!;)
Warrior Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 6:34 AM
I'm wowed! I'm wowed!...the essence of soft Bren..my sissy...beautiful on the inside as well as the outside...loved every word...a super fav...bro bro :o)
Chiri Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 6:38 AM
Ah bro bro thank you so very much!;) love ya bro!;)
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