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their eyes they flutter or is it propel either way a subtle prelude to a kiss out of sync their conversation an amalgamation of giggles and smiles more telepathy between hearts than anything else their legs entwined like shoestrings on a pair of old sneakers seem to imply the mating ritual of hoverflies

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Date: 8/26/2018 9:48:00 PM
Richard, you describe these precious moments so poetically.. it brings me back to my youth when passion's new frontiers were yet unexplored.. Beautiful poetry with wonderful imagery, I especially love the first two lines.. Warmest wishes always my frien.. ~Susan
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Ricky Muse
Date: 8/30/2018 8:43:00 PM
This poem always seemed too simple to me yet I never rewrote it. What a confused poet I am. Thanks Susan for all your support and kind words...……………..peace!

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