Esprit Flying

From stars we've fallen,
Following a trip of destination secret.
Conspiracy of Universe 
In an endless course.
Some choices own mysterious terms.
Yet, thousands of golden signatures
Brought us in fields of a land
Earthen and wet.
We walk these paths of pebbles
With human steps,
Shapes formed for a purpose divine.
Out of this body,
This shield
We search our alter ego
Resembling to a half moon profile,
Trying to grasp the lost gold.
Our hands, carved and stoned
Holding years of gratitude and flaws,
Yet there are so empty!
Our feet, stuck to a road reaching to a dead end 
Never learned to fly.
The unreachable sky we stare,
Creating Myths about Gods who passed and died,
Deceiving rain and snow with a mind
Promising but always defective.
Are we the secrets of a divine reason
Not yet revealed? 
The aces in a game fixed?
Through oblivion we survive,
If only one remembered, in what world would we live?
And we balance between catastrophe and evolution
Stars with a trembling light in nights of temptation.
Out of this body, this earthen invention
There is a truth seeking it's glory
There is a story seeking it's chronicle
There is divinity seeking spirits of purity.
Esprit flying, forming blue, red, yellow, black and white 
From the start
In a world where the last judgement awaits.
A redemption for the soul's trip. 
The endless journey we find and condemn,
A distribution we pass with divine hands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/23/2011 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Valeria. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:20:00 PM
Congratulations for winning in Deb's contest with this entry.
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:29:00 PM
Hi Valeria - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
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Date: 2/11/2011 5:20:00 PM
Congrats Valeria on your amazing win in Debbie's contest with this wonderful write and entry luv... enjoy for a well deserved win..
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Date: 2/8/2011 5:21:00 PM
Please list your FORM as FREE VERSE my new poet friend. No unlabled poem can win a contest on this site, it is free verse! Thanks so much for the great entry! Light & Love
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Date: 1/24/2011 6:56:00 PM
a lovely and beautiful write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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