Chris Hagy Poet Free verse

Especially Now

Pale Reflection of the Color of Life
Clear Vision of Evaded Memories
Time is Unstoppable when it does not seem to Move
Love is Painful when it Cares the most
Hopeless Decisions feed the Pain...Especially Now

A Dark Night caters to the Conscience
New feelings that must be Old
Restlessly waiting for Nothing to change
Informed of the Unawareness
Darkness surrounds this Light...Especially Now

Fading thoughts of Dark Years
Close friend Far away
Quiet screaming invades the Noise
Desperation is Unheard
The Night goes on and The Edge bears laughter...Especially now 

- an abstract write of an abstract evening

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Paul Callus October 2, 2016 at 3:06 PM I reckon this is one of your best writes, Chris. It is very expressive and you manage to draw us into your abstract feelings and situations. ~ Regards // paul Chris Hagy October 2, 2016 at 6:29 PM Thanks Paul...always enjoy your visits:) I reckon that is one of the best comments I've had!

James Inman August 13, 2016 at 8:46 AM I find the use of capitol letters throughout the write to be effective in emphasizing these words. Love the line, "Time is Unstoppable when it does not seem to Move" and your phrasal juxtaposition of normally contradictory ideas. Chris Hagy August 14, 2016 at 7:45 PM Thanks so much for your time James:)...you seem to understand this appreciate this write, thanks for the kind words!

Winged Warrior August 12, 2016 at 8:52 AM Especially great abstract Chris...enjoyed it...god bless...^WW^ Chris Hagy August 14, 2016 at 7:43 PM Glad you enjoyed the read ^WW^...Thanks for your time, love your screen name...my old band's name was Warrior:)

Andrea Dietrich August 10, 2016 at 10:16 PM I enjoyed this "abstract write" Did you really experience such an evening? Chris Hagy August 14, 2016 at 7:40 PM Why yes, I have experienced a few of these nights in my life so far...so only thing for me to do is write about it.

Lynn Marie August 10, 2016 at 7:05 PM Your very expressive words capture the desolate feel just marvelously. The title, your "abstract" note at the end, is excellent writing all around. I know this theme well..great job! bundles of blessings, lynn Chris Hagy August 14, 2016 at 7:35 PM Thanks for the kind words Lynn and for your time:)

Tim Smith August 10, 2016 at 6:47 PM I know the feeling all to well Chris. Chris Hagy August 14, 2016 at 7:33 PM Nice to know others can relate...thanks for reading:)