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Especially Now

Pale Reflection of the Color of Life
Clear Vision of Evaded Memories
Time is Unstoppable when it does not seem to Move
Love is Painful when it Cares the most
Hopeless Decisions feed the Pain...Especially Now

A Dark Night caters to the Conscience
New feelings that must be Old
Restlessly waiting for Nothing to change
Informed of the Unawareness
Darkness surrounds this Light...Especially Now

Fading thoughts of Dark Years
Close friend Far away
Quiet screaming invades the Noise
Desperation is Unheard
The Night goes on and The Edge bears laughter...Especially now 

- an abstract write of an abstract evening

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/2/2016 3:06:00 PM

I reckon this is one of your best writes, Chris. It is very expressive and you manage to draw us into your abstract feelings and situations. ~ Regards // paul

Chris Hagy
Date: 10/2/2016 6:29:00 PM

Thanks Paul...always enjoy your visits:) I reckon that is one of the best comments I've had!

James Inman

Date: 8/13/2016 8:46:00 AM

I find the use of capitol letters throughout the write to be effective in emphasizing these words. Love the line, "Time is Unstoppable when it does not seem to Move" and your phrasal juxtaposition of normally contradictory ideas.

Chris Hagy
Date: 8/14/2016 7:45:00 PM

Thanks so much for your time James:)...you seem to understand this appreciate this write, thanks for the kind words!

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/12/2016 8:52:00 AM

Especially great abstract Chris...enjoyed it...god bless...^WW^

Chris Hagy
Date: 8/14/2016 7:43:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed the read ^WW^...Thanks for your time, love your screen name...my old band's name was Warrior:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2016 10:16:00 PM

I enjoyed this "abstract write" Did you really experience such an evening?

Chris Hagy
Date: 8/14/2016 7:40:00 PM

Why yes, I have experienced a few of these nights in my life so far...so only thing for me to do is write about it.

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/10/2016 7:05:00 PM

Your very expressive words capture the desolate feel just marvelously. The title, your "abstract" note at the end, is excellent writing all around. I know this theme well..great job! bundles of blessings, lynn

Chris Hagy
Date: 8/14/2016 7:35:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words Lynn and for your time:)