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Isn't great that we adore each other? Isn't great that the two bottles are together? Isn't great that we own the world? Isn't great that we've created a story to be told? Isn't sweet that I can hear your voice? Isn't sweeter that I'm your choice? Isn't beautiful that you gave me the sun? Isn't beautiful that we're lying on the sand? Isn't cloying that I am the bee? Isn't cloying that you're my honey? Isn't enticing that we're floating on the clouds? Isn't enticing that we can sing a song so loud? Isn't startling that I am your queen? Isn't startling that you're my king? Isn't wonderful that we live in a palace? Isn't wonderful that I am Alice? Isn't enthusiastic that we're walking in the woods? Isn't enthusiastic that we can stay so good? But isn't horrifying that the two bottles are breaking? Isn't more horrifying that I am just dreaming?

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Date: 3/21/2016 9:50:00 PM
Jonna, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Jonna Gallano
Date: 4/12/2016 5:19:00 AM
Thanks Linda :)
Date: 1/21/2016 2:49:00 PM
Epic from beginning to end. A beautiful style from the heart and soul. Awesome poetry! Keep writing with your might. I'm delighted to see a cool style like this. -Always, JW Earnings
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Jonna Gallano
Date: 1/21/2016 3:05:00 PM
Oh my gosh. I'm so flattered! And your poetry is good too! Thank you J.W. :)
Date: 1/18/2016 10:30:00 PM
the most horrifying thing....is that those about which we dream....will never reach the scene....where our Love will be redeemed....hindering me from being your king....making it impossible for you to become my queen....yet still, your words are Beautiful as if they want to sing....;)
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Jonna Gallano
Date: 1/19/2016 6:15:00 AM
Wow! You're such a great poet Eric! :) Thanks for sharing!