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Escaping Is His Name

i'll never forget the way his words fell across the page his ciceronian elegance the effulgence of my soul amidst the threads of darkest nights spun as if through stars we danced within the shadows 'neath the pearly moon i remember the way our muses spoke mindful thoughts in hidden speech epistolary notes in whispers romance upon the sheets though i can't recall .....his name through all these heartfelt writes September 14, 2019 What's his name Contest Sponsored by John Lawless

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John Lawless

Date: 10/2/2019 2:12:00 PM

..."epistolary notes in whispers" "romance upon the sheets" Love this metaphor for the sensual exchange of love letters and/or poetry....

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 4:38:00 PM

Thank you John, for hosting the contest that brought this forth, for the win and your kind words :) hugs

Hilo Poet

Date: 9/30/2019 2:24:00 PM

My compliments on your placement--like your word usage! ~ Aloha always William

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/30/2019 7:00:00 PM

Thank you so much William...i like using a mix of ordinary and unique words sometimes :) hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 9/30/2019 1:49:00 PM

Congrats Sandy on another win, no surprise to see your name in the winners circle, with ciceronian, effulgence you can't go wrong (love those words).

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/30/2019 6:59:00 PM

Thank you so much John...sometimes i take the word of the day from thesaurus and write a whole poem on it... ciceronian was one of those words...it happened to work well with that contest theme... :) hugs

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/30/2019 1:01:00 PM

Sandy congrats on your win!;) I will still be around to read just to let you know! I just have some issues I'm working through!;) but congrats!

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/30/2019 1:10:00 PM

Thank you. Glad to hear you are still around. Hope things look up soon :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 9/17/2019 7:07:00 AM

Sometimes names aren't really that important when mesmerizing poetry is around. This was amazing Sandy. Best wishes in the contest

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/17/2019 8:50:00 AM

Thank you my friend. It was a fun time, my poetry site had been closed a year and I had nowhere to share my musings and then found this songwriter who shared his songs and I started responding to the lyrics poetically. It became a game and when others saw what was going on sometimes they would chime in as well. :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2019 6:43:00 PM

I took the theme in a humorous way but I see you took it quite the opposite and you came up with a gem! Sparkle on, dear poetess.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/15/2019 8:00:00 PM

lol Thanks my friend...:) hugs

Silent One

Date: 9/15/2019 9:16:00 AM

Your words are simple, but they have such an impact.. sign of great poetry and what a talented poet you are..

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/15/2019 5:35:00 PM

awww Thank you for the compliment my friend...:) hugs

Hilo Poet

Date: 9/15/2019 7:08:00 AM

It shines, it speaks, and it sends--it's tightly wedged to remember, again, the moments ~ Aloha always William

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/15/2019 5:34:00 PM

thank you William...i always remember the fun moments, it helped me grow poetically :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2019 7:02:00 AM

... :) ... the name does not matter, Sandra :))) .... you have a lovely memory ... :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/15/2019 5:33:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise....it was fun for sure...then someone else jumped on board and started adding to the chain of musings... :) hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/15/2019 2:41:00 AM

Our muses spoke mindful thoughts in hidden speech .......... though I can't recall his name ................ although romance upon the sheets. A Sensuous write dear Sandra, it is sometimes easier to let the mind fantasize through a muse and can it can be a real dreamy experience. Hugs, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/15/2019 5:31:00 PM

it surely was a fun time, we never spoke more than through muses... thank you :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/14/2019 9:27:00 PM

This ending really surprised me. Especially potent coming from a non-male. Great one for the contest! Cheers, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/15/2019 5:28:00 PM

lol thanks Gershon my muse gets inspired like that sometimes and will carry on a poetic conversation without talking to someone, been a few i wrote with like this throughout the years of poetry :) hugs

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/14/2019 6:11:00 PM

Wow woman!;) you keep the heat up don't you! Lol! Now I'm second guessing mine! Wonderfully written my friend!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/14/2019 6:33:00 PM

lol...was a fun but weird experience, he would write a lyric to his songs, my muse would write a poem in response and it went back and fourth for quite some time....we never had real conversations, just like on big continuous collaboration! :) Thank you.... hugs, and yours was perfect, romantic and beautifully penned :)

John Hamilton

Date: 9/14/2019 3:39:00 PM

Ciceronian...I think I have to look that one up, another special write from your talented quill Sandy, just great!

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/14/2019 6:30:00 PM

Thank you John, your kind comments always make me smile...i was questioning this one in my mind, i feel better now :) hugs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/14/2019 2:11:00 PM

Oh, my! All these vivid memories and she can't remember his name! Haven't seen the contest, but really enjoyed your poem. (Maybe they will meet again.) Best wishes in the contest, Sandra!

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/14/2019 2:17:00 PM

Lol contest is can’t remember what’s his/her name. It was a fun write :) it was many years ago thank you ! Hugs

Judy Ball

Date: 9/14/2019 12:59:00 PM

Ah sometimes the best love affairs only take place in the mind. Great job here. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/14/2019 1:11:00 PM

it was a fun time, speaking just poetically through muses, thanks for the visit, read and kind comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/14/2019 11:30:00 AM

Who needs the name any way when he evokes: ciceronian elegance..the effulgence of soul..and..epistolary notes in whispers. A splendid write, as always, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/14/2019 11:46:00 AM

Haha thanks my friend. I used to muse back and fourth with a singer song writer. Never met never spoke outside of metaphorical language. Some beautiful poems fell but I don’t recall his name :) hugs