Escaping From the Cold

the screen projection movie theater dark — glow of lightning bug 11/21/2018

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/24/2018 2:35:00 PM

Are we at the drive-in? Those aren't the things I noticed ... Your write is so cute, lightening bugs always call to my inner child, but I am honestly unsure about the drive-in thing which is just another normal day for me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/24/2018 6:29:00 PM

An inside screen in Minnesota. My grandson noticed it!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/22/2018 7:33:00 AM

- Great done, Kim ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2018 9:12:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/21/2018 10:46:00 PM

nicely done,, the lightning bugs are getting very few around her...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2018 10:48:00 PM

Thanks, Eve!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/21/2018 8:44:00 PM

Your haiku is a classy haiku; I can so be there just by re-reading it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2018 8:47:00 PM

Thanks, Caren!