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Escaping

The shining sun burning down the days and memories to ashes. The breeze blowing away the fresh peaceful evening when everyone was sitting down playing, talking and laughing. Beautiful moments perfumed by the essence of flowers and earth were carried away by the singing wind... blessed eyes with the color of Hope... green,green as birds' songs and the greeting of a Crystal River I went with its current in order to escape the past that doesn't exist but in my mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/24/2011 7:25:00 AM
Thank you all for your congrads <3
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Date: 7/23/2011 9:05:00 PM
yesica, congrats on your poem being featured this week,have yourself a wonderful weekend,..p.d.
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:01:00 PM
congrads. but this is a great piece of work . i can almost see it.
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Date: 7/20/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congrats on this feature! Hola Yesica! These lines were truly captivating. Wonderful work!
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Date: 7/17/2011 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Yesica. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 1:39:00 PM
Nice escape to the lap of nature, yesica
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Date: 4/13/2011 7:31:00 AM
This is a reflective poem.
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Yesica Lantigua
Date: 7/24/2011 7:24:00 AM
someone asked in private what type of poem was it.
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John Loving Iii
Date: 7/20/2011 7:02:00 PM
so what.

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