Escaping

The shining sun burning down the days and memories to ashes.

The breeze blowing away the fresh peaceful evening when everyone was sitting down 
playing, talking and laughing.

Beautiful moments perfumed by the essence of flowers and earth were carried away by 
the singing wind... 

blessed eyes with the color of Hope... green,green as birds' songs and the greeting of a 
Crystal River

I went with its current in order to escape the past that doesn't exist but in my mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lantigua Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 7:25 AM
Thank you all for your congrads <3
A   Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 9:05 PM
yesica, congrats on your poem being featured this week,have yourself a wonderful weekend,..p.d.
Loving Iii Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 7:01 PM
congrads. but this is a great piece of work . i can almost see it.
Tacito Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 5:23 AM
Congrats on this feature! Hola Yesica! These lines were truly captivating. Wonderful work!
Brown Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 3:11 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Yesica. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Nice escape to the lap of nature, yesica
Lantigua Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 7:31 AM
This is a reflective poem.
Lantigua Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 7:24 AM
someone asked in private what type of poem was it.
Loving Iii Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 7:02 PM
so what.
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