Escape

Escape is all I want to do, escape from all my thoughts; they scare me and frighten me I'm feeling like I'm caught. Caught by all things evil I'm falling into the trap. I'm afraid if I keep listening that there is no coming back. My mind is my worst enemy I know it tells me lies; I'm determined to escape it, then at times I wonder why.

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Lilly Davis

Date: 11/3/2016 12:21:00 PM

Are you struggling depression or something.... Not meaning that in a bad way I want to be friends

Monica Vance
Date: 11/6/2016 4:43:00 AM

I am bi-polar plus I have a personality issue. Abuse and everything else. Your poetry is awesome. Yea it would be nice to be friends.

Keith Osborne

Date: 10/14/2016 7:24:00 PM

Very nice. I tangled with some of these same thoughts over the years. My only qualm is the double negative ' isn't no coming back '. If you were to remove the n't , it has so much more of an impact. Other than that, I say good job.

Monica Vance
Date: 10/18/2016 2:28:00 AM

Thank you I never even noticed that, I will change it. Truly is better like that.

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2016 2:35:00 PM

true words monica. skat

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/26/2016 2:24:00 PM

I could not have ssid it better myself.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/26/2016 10:50:00 AM

Very good Monica....Linda