Escape

Far away from the
grayness; the choking hands of
mediocrity
into your burning
darkness I immerse.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Shanmugam Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:37 PM
Nice tanka:):)
Bosa Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Thank you so much! :-)))
Tomlin Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 5:16 AM
rated 7
Tomlin Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 3:17 PM
deep and dark. Nice piece.
Bosa Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Thank you, Steve! :-)))
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