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Escape

Take a toke write some notes all these frontin people are just a big hoax oh you think this a joke? well nope its not let me get into your brain open a new begining to figure out your real purpose and i will not stop till the day I drop all you brainless people think its everything to make that gwuap but nope its not I will one day make a change and watch all you fake lyricist's flop i will never quit i am very legit when it comes to spit light up a joint and lets get lit lets skip and the laughing and harassing and start breath grasping hold it it tight dont let the true God escape your sight damn right you will have to put up a fight i can guide you to the true light telling the truth despite all the evil that is after me i will do whatever i have to, to make you see that everything you see isnt always what it seems to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/7/2012 1:31:00 AM
Hey Ray, I am loving the beat in your poem. And your tone is on point - challenging but not disrespectful. I like that! Very nice!
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Date: 8/30/2012 1:44:00 PM
Please leave feed back(: Appreciated.
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Date: 8/30/2012 5:05:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Ray. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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