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Ersatz Ecstasy

Substitute happiness modeled on material things Buy new iterations of the same every seasonal change Improved, your life will be from promises of acquisition guarantee Ersatz ecstasy ... cankered desires rotting the spirit from within Manufactured joy bought with paper and plastic Non-biodegradable debris tossed away in a cobweb attic If every item sold be advertised as perfection, why don’t the products last forever? Ersatz ecstasy ... weak imitations trying to pass as the real thing Man-made idols coined as possessions of replicated paradise Substitute garden of Eden in need of repair by machines without a soul Ersatz ecstasy loses its potency when the expiration date gets old Leaving you with empty happiness that can’t be sold

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Date: 9/26/2017 6:11:00 AM
I'm a smidge more intelligent now having learnt 'ersatz'
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Date: 9/20/2017 2:10:00 AM
Hi, RW!!! Once I looked up "Ersatz" this all fell into place! LOL!!! Great piece and title, my friend!
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Date: 9/19/2017 7:41:00 PM
Awesome analysis Freddie; material things aren't going to buy us humans happiness!~P & L~Che :)
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