Eros Son of Venus

Oh, divine Eros, 

Son of Venus, 

Conqueror of hearts, 

Better it is for me your loyal subject to become

In your blissful dominion of love 

Than 

Arms against your sweet tyranny to take

For

My freedom to retain!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
     29 March 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Williams Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 10:41 PM
Choose Freedom over Love. Wonderfully written dear Demetrios. A 7+ and thanks for sharing
Williams Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 4:10 AM
Lol, strictly in humor Demetrios my dear, I was meaning your Cupid Eros, freedom instead of love with him.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 1:30 AM
Have you really my friend, Maria? True love my dear is freedom and love of God is absolute freedom! Thank you for your visit . God bless you!
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 8:47 PM
The love God ... Some times? freedom best
Trifiatis Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 1:32 AM
I gave my answer to Maria above, dearest Eve. Thank you my friend. God bless you!
Green Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 7:26 AM
This was different and I loved it. This felt good to read and is so creative and expertly penned. Wonderful my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Thank you, Chris for your lovely visit and comment!
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